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BabyAngelStar101 chapter 18 . 8/12/2018 I always love your stories. Always so cute and sweet, no matter the length of it or the topic. Your way of writing always made my heart flutter! I hope to see another chapter soon |
Josh SB chapter 18 . 1/12/2017 Well, good to know you're still alive. This chapter isn't that bad, however off-the-mark you make it out to be in the author's note. Personally I think it'd be better if the more descriptive parts were more concise, without so many descriptions. I know you're trying to describe all of what's happening, but this makes the story lose it's 'perfect' feeling. The humour's nice, though, and the dialogue's good. Josh |
Ashley Sky chapter 18 . 12/20/2016 This was the cutest ever 3 Just the underlying tones of a crush and Gogo discovering herself, with Tadashi's help 3 awwww I haven't been on for sooo long, until I got a notification for your new chapter in my email inbox. Thanks so much for writing this, it was a lovely holiday gift :D Happy holidays, merry week before Christmas! Good luck with any future writer's blocks, i believe in you! |
wanderingghost1257 chapter 18 . 12/20/2016 Hi, great to see you're still writing and updating. This is rather coincidental, since we are both up way too late to be healthy ( Malaysian here). It's rather apt, seeing this update, because I'm helping my friend go through a break up, and his last date with his girlfriend was to a bowling alley, so thank you, your story cheered him up. Hope to read more of your amazing writing. |
DiamondAndPearlStories chapter 17 . 9/8/2016 I would love to see more! GoGo is my favourite character! |
stubbornheroine chapter 17 . 12/29/2015 poor Gogo. well some people are not cut out for cooking. lol Tadashi is so sweet and understanding Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New year too! |
stubbornheroine chapter 16 . 12/29/2015 an in denial and jealous Gogo still cute and funny :D |
nap team captain chapter 17 . 12/28/2015 Awwww ... This was so sweet! Keep writing, I love it |
BabyAngelStar101 chapter 17 . 12/28/2015 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Lol i thought it was sososo funny/embarressing when Gogo confessed that she bought it from the store. It reminds me of a time i messed up cooking...oh the memories of- err not a good time to menition that I was HONORED to see my name for that shoutout! Thank you sooo much, you're my fav auhor Tomadashi is special to me because they're like magnets negitive attracks the positive...or the other way around, either way it works. Plus they're cute to draw together. BTW, i made a comic of one of your stories. I'll tell ya when i post it somewhere... |
starscriptmage chapter 17 . 12/28/2015 Mm, I have to agree with you on that. The reason why I ship Tomadashi and not Tadahoney is because GoGo and Tadashi have more... electric? chemistry. Tadashi and Honey, I think, would be kind of cute together, but GoGo and Tadashi fit better, because they drive each other to become better people, and both of them have such varying viewpoints and opinions that it's interesting to read (and write) about them changing merely because of being in the other's presence. Both of them interact very cutely around each other as well, and you are absolutely correct on the fact that they are able to tease each other. Tomadashi is such a lovely pairing, because of how they're so far away and so close at the same time. And that both characters have hard and soft sides, but are opposites at the same time. This was a really adorable chapter ;) I haven't commented a lot so far, so I'm sorry about that, but I think all these little one-shots are immensely in-character. And that you could possibly be one of the best writers out there for this lovely pairing. |
BabyAngelStar101 chapter 16 . 12/20/2015 YahahahahahahahahHahaha! Squeeeeeelz~ this was honestly sososo cute. Too much! Too awesome I cannot contain! Tadashi actually scared me a little bit and I was like, omagod his brain is messed up. I thought this whole thing was another unique experiance that changes eveything between them 4evr Welcome back my friend! |
stubbornheroine chapter 15 . 11/30/2015 how sweet. thanks for this |
stubbornheroine chapter 14 . 11/30/2015 haha. she got him a boyfriend cardigan. lol lovely oneshot. i guess she didn't give the letter then? |
nap team captain chapter 15 . 11/23/2015 So cute! I can't even! Keep writing |
ayinvui chapter 14 . 11/23/2015 Waaahhhh I love love love this one! It's so cute seeing this side of Gogo and the impulsiveness to buy a cardigan as a gift is just cuuuute. CUTE CUTE CUUUUTE /melts |