| Reviews for Hot Chocolate |
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TinyCupcake chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Aww, ain't that just sweeeeeeet? |
Lyoth737 chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 Beautiful fanfic! |
socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 This is very adorable. I love their cute bonding. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2017 Love it great job |
Nanenna chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 Ah, this is so perfect! I love how you showed Greg and Wirt interacting and the bit about the cold really got to me. |
StoryLover149 chapter 1 . 5/6/2015 What really stood out to me in this piece was how Wirt and Greg were so in character, especially with the way they talked. I also like how the prose sometimes sounded like Wirt's pooetic ramblings. It was really cool :) |
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 I loved this:) |
Mattias Stubbe chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 Omg, I really loved this a lot! Especially your mentions of Wirt as a Pilgrim; those sentences were gorgeously crafted works of art! Seriously, I had to create a new note just so I could keep them close and look at them now and then. A job, you're incredible! Also, I love the tune of your song and you have a really great voice! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 Dawwww this was adorable :3 |
broken halleluiah chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 I like this so much I'm having trouble grouping my thoughts. But I have to try. First of all you totally nailed the tone of Over the Garden Wall- not JUST in the characterizations of Greg and Wirt (although those are spot-on in every respect), but in the way you've romanticized and almost personified the icy cold and even the "journey" home from school. I love the references to their adventures you've included- Wirt being the Pilgrim, the old north wind- and the even more subtle details that show the shift in their relationship- Wirt holding Greg's hand to cross the street. You really have a knack for tiny details that pack a lot of emotion, like Greg's fingers not quite meeting around the mug of cocoa. I love the fact that they are both a little haunted by the cold and the Beast. The lingering chill won't ever be enough to make them regret that adventure, though. This is so sweet. I looked on your tumblr and the song is awesome! The tune totally sounds like something off the series and you did a nice job singing it. :) |
M.R chapter 1 . 12/5/2014 This is absolutely fantastic! Everything about it feels in character, and it's a nice cozy story for this particularly chilly December night. Thank you for reminding me of my two favorite pilgrims! |
purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 When they started singing I just got so lost in fluff! |
Ruk chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Yeah, the link still isn't good for your tumblr, sorry. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Cute! : D |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014 Aw! I love this! It's wonderful! Rock on! |