it would make for an interesting bit if she resigned in her quarters refusing to eat, just cry, and withdraw whispers throughout thedas that she was dying of a broken heart... that would catch his attention. Is what i felt my inquisitor would do. we need dlc or new game now bioware loves to hurt our feels :(

This was a very enjoyable excerpt. I even almost cried! Every word literally cut into me.
I sincerely hope you add to this. It's very good!

This is very good! I can't wait to read more! Keep it up!

Must...see...more... _ Beautiful beginning!

A wonderful beginning! I'm eager to see where you will take this.

This looks like it's going to be really good!