|Reviews for Cry for an Angel|
| Zaralann chapter 13 . 6/19/2019
This is great!
| Nikkless chapter 13 . 5/19/2019
didint like how you dealt with the water spirit
| Nikkless chapter 8 . 5/19/2019
start was good but dont like this after the inqusition came in the play
| Nikkless chapter 8 . 5/19/2019
dont like that quiche is an unintentional idiot badguy
| Nikkless chapter 4 . 5/19/2019
interesting idea but, would have done a bit differently
| Javimagine236 chapter 13 . 12/17/2018
| doom2099 chapter 13 . 10/10/2018
This is really cool crossover story! :D please keep it up, i'm eager to see what happen next to Louise and my beutifull angel Ikaros~! XD
| Drewd00d chapter 13 . 10/6/2018
First, let me say I'm really liking the how this series has been playing out so far. The plot seems to be going it's own direction and I'm curious to see how the story will play out from here.
As for the repercussions of defeating the water spirit, (beyond no love potion arc but Guiche is already dead anyway so that was already down the drain) I'm going to guess since the spirit is gone the ring would lose it's power. From there it depends on how far Cormwell has come along with overthrowing Albion and how much he's been using it. Best case scenario for Cormwell, it could just mean some very awkward moments for both parties. Worse case scenario, he's been using it to control the politicians and soldiers of Albion before they finish their revolution. In which case there's going to be a lot of angry people on both sides of the conflict gunning for him and maybe even the Reconquista as well.
But I could be totally wrong, it's just an idea I haven't seen other reviewers suggest yet. Either way things are starting to heat up and I'm looking forward to what happens from this point on.
| King of Fans chapter 13 . 9/3/2018
So tabitha can axis power from Nymph.
This means Tabitha's magic is now going to be at a completely other level. Especially when the two figure out how to better use the large scale spells more effectively, and not use so much Energy so quickly.
This will make Tabitha far more powerful and a more dominant player in futcher battles.
To the point Tabitha could potential he take down a void Mage, like her brother.
This also means that anyone else who makes a contract with a angel will become far more powerful rather they be friends or foe.
Lastly considering Louise now to modern links her exclusions are going to be far more powerful. Exclusions are going to be far more powerful. However, considering they are healers types The best I don't think it's is going to be as noticeable, but with deathly make her more dangerous in combat, and be able to perform Louise stronger attacks, and not be completely drained.
| King of Fans chapter 12 . 9/3/2018
You did a nice job at giveing Ikaros a character arc there.
You also did a nice job connecting the lore of the two shows.
Lastly I hope that the bodiless pit gage continues.
| King of Fans chapter 11 . 9/3/2018
No worries with Nymph I am possitive she can handle the water spirt.
So Tabitha's arm dose have Superstrength, but with the rest of her body unchanged, she can only do it in limited ways.
| King of Fans chapter 10 . 9/3/2018
It appeared they aren't to fare of the mark with the the second coming of Brimer.
Ok overthrow a religious order would be difficult. However, with the equip of a more flexible atomic bomb, a sign of their word, and 4 angles backing up their claims. Louise can definitely pull it of, with the right planning and dirt. Especially if they're only selecting certain individuals.
| King of Fans chapter 9 . 9/3/2018
I really like how you treated Tabitha this chapter. You gave her the spot light and once agen you showed just how good Tabitha can be as a character.
Now with Nymph as her newish familiar things are going to get interesting.
| King of Fans chapter 8 . 9/3/2018
Ahah Louise has grown quit attached to Tabitha.
Lastly it appears tabitha now has a angil and a New secret to keep.
| King of Fans chapter 7 . 9/2/2018
So that's nymphs plan.
Don't deny it Louise with no generic anime male protagonist around you will likely fall for one of the girls. As for which ones I have no clue.
Could it be the angle, the book worm, the flame, maid, or even the Princess.
She has a zero present chance of stoping Ikaris.
Lastly what can I say evil, and good is found in every being. Ranging from people that are just bad to be up there just good. So do bad thing for good reasons and Vice versa.
Even if two people are both good there dream and views can potently be enough to have them at each other throats.
It is these reasons that make humans complicated, and hard to predict as a whole.