I actually am all for the Artemis x Vergil route. I felt like you were hinting to that when they first encountered each other, and I also felt like they had some similarities with each other, one obvious thing being the bow.

Dear God! Virgil is cursed to the extreme here! still, i am hoping that he will get a break at some point. i do wonder if all this misfortune and alterations will lead to him being able to stand with the Middle-weight Leaguers at least. looking forward to more. this will be epic. until then, later!

Okay, I'm not sure if this has been brought up yet (I *have* read up to the current chapter, but I usually bypass the reader responses), but I really have to ask: is Virgil Snake's brother? Because having 3 other fetuses shrivel up and die in that dream, when only one of the three known Big Boss clones is still alive, and he's close to dying of old age... I have a nagging feeling that Les Enfant Terribles created a fourth clone on Earth-16H. Sure, he's considerably younger than the other clones, but he could have been created much later; cloning tech doesn't run out like fertility does. This would also explain the comments on his Growth Potential, since Big Boss canonically had ridiculous potential as a soldier due to his genes. Potential" in this context is of course distinct from actual "skill".)

Just my $.02 on Virgil's backstory. (It does make a lot of sense, though.)

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I thought Wayne corp wouldn't be like this but I guess you went with the more comic filled one?

By the way will Virgil ever have a rival, I don't mean like Joker rival but more along the lines of Catwoman? Aka not a murderous nutjob just a very good criminal?

I love the callback to my previous comment about MIB quotes, especially since you used my number 1 fav quote by Agent K himself. Poor Lucious just can't catch a break from hungry killer cafeteria food, a rampaging robotic sex roach, and the the wrath of a scorned pregnant woman messing up his tour. Also I wonder about what consequences Virgil will have to deal with due to his investing with Penguin, taking on an unvetted delivery, and defanging Bane right infront of Mr. I-Must-Know-Everything Batman. And bad news for whoever makes Virgil's rage boil over cause unless I'm mistaken about those last couple of lines his rage counter has just started ticking!

Wonder how the nano machine's will react to tje venom in his system and if it will give him a permanent strength boost? Keep up the good work.

so will the nanites use the venom virgil was exposed to ?

Great job. Another enjoyable chapter, hope the next one comes out soon.

man this was absolutely enjoyable to read and once again I laughed hard throughout many parts of the chapter. will be funny when the time comes when Batman looks up Virgil and makes the connection with his relationship with other people connected to the League

great chapter loved it.

Jesus Christ! First, a tour almost gone wrong at Wayne Enterprises and finally taking down BANE IN FRONT OF BATMAN! Jeez, I wouldn't be surprised if Batman paid Virgil and his girls a visit. Oh, and Virgil had the right idea, when visiting Gotham City, YOU BRING IN SOME HEAT WITH YOU, NO EXCEPTIONS!

yay another underdog story with so much luck he shits rainbows

Ummm Tiny Tina just dropped the n word...

Gwen-pool? Well ain't that damning, mostly considering she likely will ruin/fuck up a situation with her 4th wall breaking constantly. Overall pretty good chapter with Deadpool style comedy, though, make sure to space it out for more impact on the reader

Just curios if the nanobots inside Virgil multiplys, if so, can he magic enchance those instead of the off limit Nanosuit?

P.S: just wanted to add the review count. Novel is the best i found here so far. Thanks for the hard work.