Wow! This was a great story. Really enjoyed the whole thing!

This was a lovely read, thank you. I liked the idea of the third eye and Theo passing it on, having to save a life to pass it on after. It was so Hermione, and good thinking, to start the journal for the next person.

The way Harry proposed was adorable and I think you got their banter right. I liked the 'I'm sorry' and Harry's 'no, you're not' exchange. It was disappointing not to see any Ron/Ginny but for the purpose of the fic it worked. I guess we are to assume that the reason he broke up with Ginny was for Hermione, I liked that you left that assumption unsaid.

Thanks for giving us something a bit different :) good luck with future writing!
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Loveeeeeee it! Thank you for sharing!

I absolutely adored this fic, thank you so much for writing!

A really cute story!

Simply wonderful. The 'third eye curse' was very original and neatly done.

I’ve absolutely loved this story and the pairing.

An interesting short story. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

This was honestly a really interesting read. Quite unique as well.

I rarely read Harry x Hermione ship. But you made the transition naturally and smooth. Beautifully written...

Very unique H/Hr story and I love it! The 'seeing eye' curse was a brilliant idea, as was Harry's proposal at he end. Because of the scene earlier in the story of them being married with child, I thought it was perfect you did not have an epilogue for the story.

9/10

This was so cute! I'm not really a Harry x Hermione shipper (no hate whatsoever, just not usually my thing) but I thoroughly enjoyed this. Bravo.

I was wrong! These just keep getting better. What a great story, the details you go into are incredible!

Nice story!