I was not expecting this when I opened this fic. Very pleasantly surprised.

wow... just... wow... this was so heartwrenching! i love the friendship between Jaune and Ren so much! this was so amazing and sad! i kinda want to see how the girls will feel about this.

That was amazing. I know it would end badly but up til the last line I hoped they would get out of there. Great job, keep it up.
Lazyass out

Best short story ever.

Short...bittersweet...gets in our heads...your readers love it!...But another solid heartwrencher .

dang, you certainly dont like to give out happy endings...

Almost year ago i read this and it still give me the feels.

This was kind of a downer but it was well written and I feel you portrayed their character's well.

Well written. Exceedingly so.

Wow, that just gave me a feels attack. Short and sweet, this story, and i really like it.
It has a sad ending, but you can really feel the bond the team has in what you have written.
So really a bittersweet ending here.

Very well written one-shot, you're good at these.

bros last stand together

This story was amazing, I loved it.

Even if it was a dark story it was very good. I felt like it was a realistic portrayal of Jaune and Ren if they had to make a final stand.

Dark, but enjoyable.

I usually avoid death fics, so I can't necessarily say what made me decide to take a peek at this one, but I'm glad I did.

A few poignant last moments between friends and comrades.

Well done!

oh wow I just got back into the RWBY fanfics craziness and man. This was such a magnificent and perfect story to me. I would LOVE to see how everyone else would react to this.