Godly.

Looking forward to the next chapter where we may get some insight into Rundas's past, which I am excited for.

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I love that this finally got an update. It was an awesome story. I hope it will be continued.

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Good to see an update my friend! It’s been too long!

Nothing better than a little Rundas when you're out of stuff to read. I really like your story man, but dear GOD try to update a little more often, m'kay? I GOTTA HAVE MY RUNMUS!

I love it! Don't stop here! I like how you "introduce" Gandrayda to the plot, but I'm not sure I agree with you on the portrayal. Glued to someone else like a brainless bimbo? If you continue with explaining that it was all an act, I'm totally buying it, especially since you have already hinted at it with "Ghor"'s comments throughout this chapter, and the fact that Gandrayda is portraying Ghor at all. So please don't stop here!

Alas poor Ghoric I knew him sell-dom. Great chapter my friend! Looking forward to more as soon as possible.

I LOVE your portrayal of Rundas! I like how you showed him to be cocky and arrogant ('cause that's what he is." I also love the detail and the story line!

Understood commanda! It it good to see you alive and well my friend!

Good to see an update my friend, I look forward to seeing more of this story. It is quite promising and has great potential, carry on!

It is a pretty good story it's kinda trying to tell how she became the bounty hunter she is, but in a more relaxed way. I honestly don't usually read these kinds of stories but this one seems very interesting.

Looking real good, I look forward to the next chapter!

Rundas is fairly amusing, but methinks the lady doth protest too much. How do you see Samus? We all have our own take on her personality.

Always liked this school concept, but I love this spin! And Samus and Rundas. I can already see the relationship growing. Awesome start!

I like it not many people like metroid but who cares everyone has a right to their own opinion but please continue it seems like the story would be fun.