Reviews for Being Better
IceTear1 chapter 2 . 1/23/2015
This was so good and did a lot of healing with lack of Emma/parent time :)

I agree that snowing having second child while just send Emma away again was the worst way to write it in show. I know they talked about it before, but you would have thought sending Emma away again would have affected those plans and thats why Snow being insta happy about it was troubling. And this coming from someone who hoped they would have baby since 2x10 ;) Sorry this rant, I just have so many issues with how season 3 handled Charmings ;)
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 2 . 1/9/2015
AWW So sweet! I'd think Both of his women would be po'd if he died like that without telling them he had dream shade poisoning
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Aww so sweet! I bet Emma does feel replaced at times.
Grace5231973 chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
They should show us this stuff but thank God we have you fanfic writers to do the job and do it beautifully!
nothingtolose18 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
Awww I didn't realize that you were continuing this story. The ending is positively precious. I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
This is something that should have happened one the show. Great story.
parapentistria4ever chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
really nice story... when you mentioned teenager Emma, I remembered a frustrated Emma, listening to the music really loudly and trying to fix the toaster she had broken ;) things would be better if Neal was indeed an oops :P discussions like these do a lot of healing for fans :)
nothingtolose18 chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I love this so much, it's such a cute little fic. I know, I want to see more development of Snow and Emma's relationship as well. I love what you've written here, and I love the part where Snow says that her "other baby is up now". Just so adorable, and wonderfully written.