man that was something .. didnt saw it coming sadly

i wonder if this is the reason as to why weiss in the previous chapter was outside just being there.

This fic killed me so much. I'm not really a huge fan for white knight but damn the feels hits deeper than anticipated.

Ch3 was amazing, actually. I loved the dialogue between team RWBY. very in-character

Why. Just why did you feel the need to break my heart I had good faith in this now I have to go and find every white knight FanFiction just to sedate my pain thanks a fucking lot I haven’t cried fr since 20fucking17 but here I a am on the verge of tears because of the disappointment

This was the single most disappointing mutilation of the potential of a relationship I have ever read. All you had to do was make her open the door and it would have worked out. Don’t give me the “You don’t need to know why Jaune and Ruby got together, I’m literally only here because I wanted a satisfying romance. If you wanted to end it like this and not lie to your readers all you had to do was list Weiss and Jaune without bracketing them in a pairing. That would have made this an excellent series with no disappointment at the end. This was just pitiful dude. I really wanted to like this and then you had to ruin it.

This is beautiful.

So heartbreakingly fucking beautiful

awww shittttt

Look, I like Lancaster, but this? This hurts my soul. The way it was set up was so great, then the big reveal, is so heartbreaking. Only a few stories have made me feel this way.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?
I love Lancaster but you also made me like this white knight story.
THEN YOU WENT AND DID THIS.
Why must you put my emotions through such a rollercoaster, ugh.

Loved it all anyway, great story. I do wish they got their happy end but I will settle for Lancaster.

And now that I've completed it I can honestly say: fuck. You fucked me up good.

God...this was a whole ads road trip to read. I giggled. I got emotional. I smiled for various different reasons familiar and new. I even cried a little. I'll admire the ending was like getting shot by my best friend. Surprising but wouldn't want it any other way. I'm ultimately content and satisfied with how this played out and I can definitely appreciate the story. This has been one of my favorites and I thank you for it.

For the love of god order them in chronological order

ah shite what an emotional ending. And chpt. 1 at that!

it's tragic... i fucking love it

magnifico!
excellent fic! Without doubting your story is above average.
I liked all aspects of this ..

Good job!
keep going!
10/10