good chapter again it was an awesome fanfic good job x)

oh man i died laughing when may said " well, i know you'll never think i'm as pretty as your precious rocks, but... " and then they finally kiss hurray ! yeah this was a really hoenchampionshipping fanfic great job :)
I will read the epilogue now x)

i pray steven is okay é_è

they should have just gone to sinnoh immediately , sigh . now everyone's going to be unhappy in the next chapter . but at least there will be a heartfelt reunion (and maybe a real confession) hopefully soon right ?

I squealed when steven asked may to travel with him . good chapter again :)

good chapter again :)

wonder if norman's found out about may being raped . would be nice if norman and steven can team up in the end and track down the bastard who raped their beloved girl . that'll teach him...

nice to see again latios x) and steven, may isn't a kid x')

thanks godness may has steven by her side u_u through where is latios ? : o

poor may ;-; i pray that the man who did that to her be punished u_u

I discovered this a while ago, and I re-read it entirely today. I'm sorry for not saying this the first time, but this is brilliant. I can't even start on what's the most amazing in it. The style, Steven and May's characterisation, their dynamic, their backstory, the fact that you managed to make a story about rape -which is both the least romantic subject on the planet and usually disgustingly misused in fanfiction as if it actually were a romantic subject- and still make it deep and amazing, handling it with the care that it is due and actually making it something good.
Because this is freaking damn brilliant. A blatant ten. Congratulations.

I like this story, I had a good time reading it, and I have to... Huh... I only have the French in my mind, which is chapeau bas, but I just want to say that you had gutts to write about this kind of issue... So, thanks for this fiction! (and sorry for my English mistakes!

Just... It's funny for me that at nineteen, May can't drink legally alcohol... X) I'm French and we can drink legally at eighteen so... It's funny! (the warning about the underage drinking warning at the beginning surprise me a little then I remember why you put it!this story is very cool this far, so I won't bother you anymore and I gonna read the end and put a review then!

Well...the ending is kind of not enough :(

I wanna see a frantic Steven. Probably because May is almost late and May explaining what happened to her during the way.

I want to read that please :)

I just love this story!