OMG!

Very like this story! Wonderfull :)
Make more KakaOro... I love you!

I read these for killing time, but I got into it completely!I read it till 2 a.m.！These is amazing! The final battle is real such a big scene！I love those characters you describe！

A very interesting concept.

OH HOLY FUCK I LOVED THIS! THIS IS WITH OUT A DOUBT THE BEST FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ! thanks for writing it!

ok nice

Awesome...all is right with the world, Orochi is happy with Kashi and thats all that matters to me! *w00t* Now I demand you write another...go on shoo with you...*points to computer, or laptop, or tablet*

So close yet so far...almost free and then BAM that fucking creature in a can had to make itself known. *sighs*

Okay, I'm honestly suprised that this doesn't have that much reconition. This is one of the most unique stories out there, with a facinating setting. Well written with very few grammarical errors. Admittingly I'm not a huge fan of yaoi, but I make exceptions when a story is good. You're making their relationship believable and realistic (as realistic as one can make a romance between two powerhouses that happen to be captive/slave/pet shinobi that can use magic body energy). Orochimaru fanfiction are rare to come by outside of the mention of him being a crazy and semi-stupid pedophiliac tranny. So having him remain in character while showing his inner human side deserves applause. Otherwise, very good fanfiction. Keep it up, and I hope you don't get discouraged from the low amount of reviews. I'll be following this story as soon as i log into my account.

Kisame tell him Kashi is alive...that will get him to go back with the three of you...bu the way where the hell is Deidara, he was with you? Hopefully on their way they will run into Ruka and Temari and bring them along.

Orochi please don't take on too much at once...you're more injured than they are you need to rest for at least a few days. And you Kashi, get Deidara and go find Orochimaru...I'm sure the three of you can handle destroying their power source.

I hope Orochi watches his back, it is way too dangerous for him to be out there with no jutsu...hopefully that man that seemed sympathetic towards him will follow and keep him safe...lord knows he needs an allie on his side. Poor Deidara, he misses Orochi...hopefully they can resume searching for him once they are settled.

Oh you bastards have done it now, Orochi is going to kill the lot of you...though I say Kashi is a live some where, but thats besides the point.

Orochi always trust your instincts, they are NEVER wrong...something is up and your intuition is screaming that fact.

Thank the gods...Gai I love you, now the truth is out hopefully Kashi will also learn about Asuma and his lies about Orochi trying to kill him. Poor Oro he's hurt really bad, but luckily he has a medic now that knows what she's doing.

Really, really...Orochi and the others can't seem to win, who the hell is attacking them now? Maybe it's that plan Yiara was talking about, maybe he set it in motion...Kashi you seriously need to wake up and realize who your TRUE enemies are...Orochi and the Akastuki aren't it.