You are an amazing writer and I am so hoping you will continue on with this story

This story is amazing! The way you write is wonderful and I cannot wait to read more!

AHHH! The more I read this story, the more engrossed I become! and the ending to chapter ten! OMG! This is great. PLEASE keep up the good work!

Wow, I hope to read more of this story. I can't tell you how much I love it. The way you describe the characters and their feeling is simply perfect.
I'd like to point out a thousand things I love about this work of yours, but I think I can sum it up: I love everything. And in case I wasn't clear about my feelings...I LOVE IT.

Interested to see where this is going!

This is by far my favorite story on this game yet. I really hope that you finish it. I can't wait to see what happens with this love triangle plus with Alistair starting to remember. Did he never get married?

Poor Ari! How the hell do you reconcile something like that? But on the plus side, at least the lads are getting along now, right?

Why oh why did she make everyone forget her and her role? And actually, who in the nine hells IS she?

Agh I think my brain might explode trying to muddle through at this point. Especially since I'm now caught up and can spend all my free time pondering rather than reading.

There's only one solution - you obviously need to write and post soon ;) I mean otherwise you'll be responsible for my endless torment while I wait...

No pressure:)

Seriously though the story is amazing and I'm enjoying it more than I can say

Wow just wow. That was so not on my list of theories!

Love the way this is turning out and super eager to read more

But seriously, Cullen is really getting a tough time

You know I can only take so much heartache, right? Seriously, the bit with Alistair was gutting. It was almost as sad as when I played through and he made the killing blow to the archdeamon... While I often find it hard to read other people's 'canon' because I'm so attached to my play-through, this world of yours is really pulling me in. That and the fantastic writing!

I'm still waiting for the big reveal about Ari's origins and link to the hero & champion... Hint hint ;)

"Fighting to breathe. So heavy. He can't be gone. Someone tell me it's a lie. The Lion can't be dead. He is strong and proud, brave and indestructible. He saved me. He saved me so many times. And now I've killed him. What have I done? What have I done?"

That was heartbreaking to read - man I really hope she finds Cullen safe and whole. I felt her pain in my own chest as I read this section. I love that you continued with the Lion for how she thinks about him - it fits so well.

And hello Cole. Fantastic way to bring him in to the story. I'm excited to see how you write him as a character as opposed to just a phantom voice

And things were going so we'll...

Solas you foolish man

Can't review any more - must read more now!

The beginning bit with Solas was brilliantly done - his loneliness was gut wrenching and it was neat to see your pc playing with her magic.

Still giggling about the ending too :)

You've managed to make her an interesting person but still innocent without making her annoying or unrealistic - it's so much fun to read about her

Hmmmm so she's kinda like Cole - hmmm... So many possible ways to interpret that.

My curiosity is truly sparked now. Theories abound :)

Her seeing Cullen as 'the lion' is a neat touch. His reaction to the half clad lass was great - not too over the top and totally keeping with the poor awkward and damaged Templar we love

More - must read more

That was achingly sad to read - even knowing how things turn out in a general sense didn't help much.

I love how you're taking events and twisting them into something vaguely familiar but so new and exciting to read.

I'm still confused about who / what / how but I'll try to rein in my curiosity for a bit longer...

I love the depth that you've given to everything and how real everyone seems - no one is flat or just one sided.

Taking Cas' horse was a nice touch ;)

Varric's entrance was perfect - just the right mix of cheeky and honest concern.

You're making love the characters all over again - well I'm still not sold on Leliana but maybe you can convince me she's not totally blinded by her self confidence and faith. Although after her treatment of Felix in the red-lyrium future makes me doubt it...