| Reviews for Maleficent Kitsune |
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Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 14 . 7/8 This was a really good read. I was a little hesitant at seeing that the old Maleficent would be blended in, but it turned out better than I was worried it would be. I personally prefer the Phoenix version of Maleficent over the dragon one. Anyways, great job with the story. 9/10 |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/9 Dude cmon I love this story please update it |
naruto chapter 14 . 3/27 great story keep it up |
add profiel chapter 14 . 12/29/2019 I literally binge read this whole fic lol it's so good and since I don't like cross overs, that's saying alot... Please continue this wonderful story! It would be great if maleficent for her other half too! I know the chances are slim but please update! |
Earthly Entity chapter 14 . 12/13/2019 After reading, so far I can say this is an interesting story, i like the idea though the parts seems two off putting for me. It seems a a bit ooc, too much antagonism forced on almost everything to bring about how op Naruto is and the isn't much to show on relationship (like friends, family, etc.)development with a few of the characters. But this is simple what I read after reading to this point, probable someone else have some different perspective, I don't know. I just review what I read. But still I like the idea the story is trying to convey |
Earthly Entity chapter 9 . 12/13/2019 This chapter seems off putting. Isn't it risky to even let an inoichi to even wonder into the mind of a jinchuuriki. That itself seems a very on par to a close death sentence considering how bijuu are to a jinchuuriki psyche. Also from how far I read, this definitely is a konoha bashing with op Naruto. Antagonism seems high on all ends to where people act ooc and mostly irrational. |
Earthly Entity chapter 7 . 12/13/2019 Story is nice sofwr, though making Naruto op seems a bit off putting. Like reading a story where the hero always win. I would hope later in the story that there would be struggles here and there to show Naruto overcome or at least figure a way to persevere through. Also the Recruiting seems a bit fast. |
Earthly Entity chapter 6 . 12/13/2019 Definitely kept me interested. definitely seen some konoha bashing, moreso any political figure bashing. Don't know if that was purposely intended |
Earthly Entity chapter 5 . 12/13/2019 Yay nice bring tayuya and karen, though the late seems Abit ooc. Don't know if that was made purposely to bring more antagonism into the story though. |
Earthly Entity chapter 4 . 12/13/2019 I have no problem with killing off zabuza, I love him but story progression really. But the way you killed him off seems lame and cringe to read. And the way in obtaining haku also seems a bit cringe in a way. Switching one master to another doesn't seem applicable to have right off the bat. I feel as though you should have imprisoned haku and have a slow conversion towards them to develope the bond from stockholme or servitude. Haku persona isn't a need to be useful to a Master, is really need to repay zabuza for what he gave her. But this is me reading this chapter so far which by the is very interesting read, hopefully as I read more I'll get more hooked into it. |
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 what about pairing him with haku tayuya karin and yakumo |
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 please continue this and can you make it a harem and have them rebuild Uzushio |
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 2 . 11/14/2019 Awesome she owns Wave now! |
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 1 . 11/14/2019 If anything this story is definitely the best in my opinion |
Samurai4404 chapter 14 . 11/2/2019 I just wanted to know if you are still writing. I'm actually a fan, and your stories are part of the reason I keep on this site. Thanks for reading this and have a great day! |