omg this story completely just sucked me in. this was pretty amazing...and freaky, but mostly amazing...ok they were equally freaky and amazing :D

I read your story and it is the best fanfiction about Clark dreams so far. I absolutely love the whole pool of blood idea (but it is sad for Clark though). I think your whole story is one of a kind and it is an honour on reading it. Thanks for the whole creativity idea, it surely gets me up and going to write stories based on dream sequences. Well done!

quite the story. very dark and original.

All in all, I liked this story a whole lot, now I just have to add it to my favorites.

I'm sad. The final battle was a tad anticlimactic, there wasn't even any screaming or pain. ]:

Wow, this story has gripped me like no other. I'm so glad I found it, and so glad you wrote it, thank you. :)

Scarey weird... Heh.

Liked the fic. It was very interesting.

Hello! This fic is great! Normaly I don't read non-clois fics, but I'm glad I find these fic. It's one of the best smallville fics I've read, and I'm still looking for a clois fic so well written like this one. I love angst, and well, The Demon Within is heaven then. Congrats and I hope your 'smallville muse' hits you again :) Now, I have to go to read your other smallville fics!

*squee* amazing! the end was perfect. maybe if i read the whole story through a second time i could actually be un-biased but i'll just sit in the world of first-experience and say it's all perfect, ok? :D

Wow! That was amazing! And the end with Clark's mom was unexpected - I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I want to say I like the odd lettering of the evil voice.

It's broken and unrhythmic. It's separated from anything that looks natural and it's perfect for that voice :D

phew! a whole new twist on light vs dark and a whole new aproach at chloe vs. lana. i like it.

I also think you play out the characters very well, especially chloe, who is my favorite -

**bites nails** very chilling! must read next chapter!

I can't be harsh. it's too fantastic. Have I mentioned that I love lex?:)

the maggot-faced creature isn't even cliche. it's genuinely creepy and so is that voice.

wow. this is one of the most amazing things i've ever read, and darkest. I can't wait to see more. :)

Buzz is a good name for a computer. But how 'bout spending a little more time on Mere Mortals and less on naming your computer?