Reviews for Punchline
Deja Vu 22 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
I loved this! Great reactions all around. Carolina's joke made me groan. Actually, South's reaction to the joke was pretty accurate. Florida's joke was great! Appropriately morbid but funny for the guy.
When South told the golfing joke, and "From the skies, there's this big booming voice of God, and it says, "Motherfucker, I missed!" All I could think was, 'So Church is God. Huh.' And that made me laugh for an extra five minutes.
OneRealImonkey chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
I loved the jokes, the character relations AND concussed Wash.
Agent Washington chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
That last joke was pretty punny! Lina, I'm sorry about that last jok- WHY'D YOU THROW THE LAMP AT ME?! Oh. Hey sweetheart. Mommy and daddy didn't mean to fight. It's alright, Emma. It's gonna be okay...
the fox good chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
I think I know where the master chief one is from. anyways good job on this
Da Etan chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
This is just too funny. Keep up the good work!
btamamura chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
Oh ho, those were terrible jokes indeed! I chuckled at all of them though, especially Carolina's!
Eno Remnant chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
Carolina's joke made me slam my head into my bed. Repeatedly. Which is an accomplishment in and of itself.

This is great. You've characterised everyone well, you've kept the audience engaged and you've given us all a good laugh. Ticks all the boxes for a good short story like this.

So kudos, and favourited.
1stLtHChurch chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Oh my god. I have been laughing for the last five minutes, and that's just at Carolina's joke. That doesn't even count the other girls' jokes, which were brilliant. My stomach hurts so much. I love this so much.
foxtrot B-12 chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
That was absolutely beautiful
Surreptitious Chi X chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
I love this character study of all their different senses of humor. I believe it. :D Especially the climax of Carolina's sense of humor. Oh my gosh.
WhoaCreeper chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Great fic, loved South's reactions. Perhaps a sequel with the AI? Gamma, Omega, Sigma, etc. ? Though then again, Omega's only humor is death, and Delta probably can't make a joke. Oh well.
Tomas44 chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
omg that was amazing! i loved that so much, i almost want a sequel back on the MoI with the director and alpha and people
Freckle chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Wonderful writing as always! Thanks for sharing!
Jaden Silver chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
This had me giggling from the start. Well done. I feel just as disappointed as they all did after reading Carolina's joke, too.
TheAlmightyFireHawk chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Now THAT was hilarious! XDXDXDXDXD There is no punch line! XDXDXDXDXD