| Reviews for Another Mermaid Story |
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   Tora Crystallia chapter 6 . 3/28/2016 plz update |
| i love pink chapter 6 . 7/6/2015 Aw this is so cute I really, really like it. It reminds me of the Little Mermaid. I love your fic so please keep I up and update when you get the chance |
| R. J. Niner chapter 5 . 1/26/2015 Well this was definitely an interesting turn of events! I love the irony of Len criticizing Kaito and Piko for taking in two strangers before he goes and saves Rin himself XD Though I was surprised to find out about Meiko and Miki's disabilities... I think I would be even more depressed something happened to Rin too... All in all, this was a really nice chapter! The plot's moving along nicely and I can't wait to see what happens next! (Side note: I wish I had a sister like Luka...) |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/21/2015 YASSSS Storyies I like I tend to do fan art hehehe It might be bad WARNING Len abuse? I now feel sorry for him XD And now I have ideas for my story to harm him look what happened xD I think I remembered accidentally slapping my friend when he tried waking me up during the summer XD UPDATE! OwO For 4 Reviews! XD I am now a fan That's weird XD *points arrow* |
| Synchronicity girl chapter 4 . 1/21/2015 I like this story! A lot! I think the character thay's mostly like me is Rin... hahaha... I always try to watch my friends and I don't beloeve in love at first soght Hahaha, poor Len, that's a reaaaally good friend xD I loved it! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/19/2015 Plz update! I'm so addicted to RinxLen! |
| Arrow-chan3 chapter 5 . 1/18/2015 RINNNYYYYYYYYY! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
| Alskia chapter 4 . 1/11/2015 lol best remake of the mermaids vocaloid style ever XD I cracked up at what Rin did Poor Len's head... WELL DONE KAITO WELL DONE :D I really did think Piko was a girl for the longest time... Update soon kay Can I do a drawing of this like fan art? OwO |
| R. J. Niner chapter 3 . 1/5/2015 This was a nice view into Len's life! He certainly has some interesting friends as well as a fussy (but awesome) sister! XD I'm looking forward to see how they all fit into the story! Grammar-wise, the main thing I saw was still the problem of switching verb tenses, but I'm sure the more you write, it'll be easier sticking to one-tense, so you shouldn't let that bother you. Otherwise I really liked the chapter! (But oh no... you hate LenxMiku? O_O Hope you don't mind getting reviews from a person who's only written LenxMiku romance before, hehe) Happy New Year! Keep up the great work! |
| Lalala chapter 3 . 1/2/2015 Omg I love this, keep it up! I laughed a lot at Rin's "I KILLED HIM AGAIN!" XD I'm excited to see them interact again, and I'm liking every character :3 Love Kaito's clueless personality and feminine Piko xD And Len being abused hahaha Please update soon! ;D |
| Arrow-chan3 chapter 3 . 1/2/2015 :3 Really now, Lenny? I wonder what your reaction would be once you find out... :3 |
| Lolly1o1 chapter 2 . 12/3/2014 Haha Len got hit in the head with a rock xD thank you I really needed this cause I just read a sad one :( so I'm glad this one made me laugh! :) please update soon! |
| Emily chapter 2 . 11/29/2014 Wow! I am really enjoying this... I know how it is when you first start out doing this so keep it up. Also, I think that personally it doesn't matter if you do POV or not, it really is personal preference! I just wanted to say thank you and welcome to ! |
| Moonlight queen chapter 2 . 11/29/2014 Loved it! Update soon |
| Arrow-chan3 chapter 2 . 11/30/2014 IT'S LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
