Great story.

Very creative, & very different. Loved the McNozzo !

Awesome story!

Well, my dear, as Ducky would say, I loved every aspect of the story! Just enough to keep me reading til the end! Great job! Good show! TTFN!

Nice story, I had thought Tony was going to suffer some sort of respiratory problem due to his lungs & the sedation suppressing his respiratory system but I'm glad the old boys could save the day.

really enjoyed the story. loved the characterization and dialogue between tim and tony in the story. your bad guys were so, so creepy. it was a fun and great read to put a smile on my face before work. thanks for writing and sharing! :)

Great story with a happy ending! Loved Rush and Metcalfe saving Tony driving up in their t-bird! And Gibbs taking the boys to Venice beach!

Awesome story. I just caught up and read the rest. I can't wait to see what you come up with next

Loved all the action! Great stuff :)

Nice ending all around you wrapped it all up perfectly. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

nice story

Loved the story! Great mix of drama, light humor, and slapstick, not to mention some rather memorable characters - including the bright pink T-bird!

Can't you just see Gibbs building - and then sailing - a gondola? Although I don't remember Long Beach having gondolas when I lived in the area - maybe I just didn't know the right place to look!

Looking forward eagerly to your next story!

"McTony" grins! This was really fun to read!

loved this story.

Did I love Rush and Metcaf saving the day

This was really good, and I have to admit that I just loved Cornelius and Freddy Metcalf! LOL!