great chapter

excellent story so far

Excellent story idea!

Excellent!

I like this plot line its really good and I look forward to reading more.

It's really good so far. Keep up the good work and update soon, please!

Good story so far would love to see you continue it I love super harry and Hermione stories

You can go anywhere with them disappearing like that. back in time or doing a crossover with virtually any show book or movie you want!
Wished Luna was used as the girl but hey I like her and Hermione!

I was right they did go somewhere else...and of course the continuation is so good...

Hey nice of you to leave us your plot ideas like you stated everyone else is doing it...in fact I'm thinking of doing it myself but as to this here I dont see them as gone but as being transported away somewhere else...and oh yeah that little girl was an angel from that tv series Touched By an Angel...