Depression in 3 chapters

i literally hate you so much

Aaaaaand now I'm crying ;_; this is so goddamn depressing! Ugh I feel so sad. Beautiful angst. Well done, beefy "cries"

Oh it was just a bad dream. Phew... Wait Elsa's left again?! She better be okay now!

Ummmm... What is happening?! Is Elsa gonna be okay? She better be okay!

Dude... I-I have no-no w-words. Holy Shit this is the first time I've cried so much in years, thank you for ripping my heart out and shredding it to pieces, oh my God I'm crying so much rn.

MY EMOTIONS

Dudeeeeee..

This is great, but give a warning for tears next time. What Anna is going through sounds a lot like what I'm going though emotionally, but to a greater extent for her. Sometimes I feel like I've got it together, but once in a while, I'll break down uncontrollably. I love this because the pattern of emotions is just so relatable.

You
I WAS PROMICED FLUFF
Not tears ;-;

Oh shit you put the other bits up. That's some good shit m8.

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You really need to have at least one more chapter. A bitter sweet kind where Anna commits suicide but is at least with Elsa. BTW: beautiful fic but fuck you for making me cry.

Look, I know you're trying to make this story sad, but I kinda feel that it's not over yet.

Because from the looks of it, there was no character progression with Anna because it feels like she hasn't changed in this one, she still gets easily depressed over Elsa's death.

I know how it feels like to grieve over someone who died, but it doesn't feel like Anna is making any progress naturally. She's basically back to square one with this.

Though you did a fantastic job with Chapter 2, that was deliciously heartbreakingly cruel, had a tear in my eye because that was just sad. You gave me hope the whole entire thing was just a bad dream but in actuality, it's just Anna not getting used to the fact that her wife is gone.

That was just amazingly depressing.

I'm not expecting Elsa to get revived or anything, but I do desire to see a good closure for Anna as a character because I think she deserves it.

I'm not expecting a happy ending or anything but it kinda feels like the story isn't over yet.

Chapter 2 was great actually, made me feel depressed for a moment because I've rarely seen that in most stories like this. The fact that Anna dreamt about Elsa still being alive just hurts because it's obvious she's still not used to her being gone.

But still, the story doesn't feel over yet because there is no resolution, it feels like we got a beginning a middle but there is no end.

Okay, I'm still confused... So was chapter two really the dream then and not what happened in chapter 1? Because it has that little part at the end (when Elsa is leaving to make breakfast) that is more Elsa's POV and I'm not sure how that could have happened if Anna is dreaming and didn't see that part and the fic is in her POV. Or... was Elsa a ghost? Yeah... I'm confused. lol I did like the emotional rollercoaster, just wish things were a little more clear.