I could hear the voices in my head as they spoke. I love it hehe

Awesome writing :)

I can hear Mickey's voice during the dialogue. A little punctuation clean up and this piece will shine.

i loved how
You made it so real like thats acutely what happend in one episode

Ahhh, cuteness heaped on cuteness.

that made me feel all warm inside! lol I hope you write some more small mickey and ian stuff, your the closest one to their actually characteristics so far.!

that was beautiful like I started crying from how cute this is and im happy and crying and this was so fucking cute