This is a good story so far. Though the POV is disconcerting.

Really hoping this fanfic continues

I just realized I never posted my review for either chapter 102 or 103, so I'm here now to make up for it.

I'm actually very interested in a new update. Your choice of ending this was actually very refreshing. To end with a new character style is very subtle, though the thought behind it very bold. It makes me excited for the future!

Looking forward to the continuation! Please take as much time as you need. I know that whatever you deliver will far exceed my hope and expectations.

I don’t want a lot for Christmas
There is just one thing I need
I don’t care about the presents
Underneath the Christmas tree
I just want an update for reading
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true oh
All I want for Christmas is an update

I dont really like it when stories change pov. So going to ignore that and hope Im not missing out on to much.

I wouldn't tell them. Ever. Is it normal to be so willing to tell people things? I've read a lot of these kinds of fanfics and it seems like more often than not the main character tells someone, and so few of those even have consequences for it!

Sorry, I don’t mean to pressure you or anything I have just been looking forward to the next chapter so much I have reread most of the book. Please update soon! 3

Ahhh! What happens next!?

Hey

First, I love this story so much. I am not sure but I would say this is the story I read most of all books I've ever read. Just because of this long gaps and me losing the hang of it '

Second, I like the link for the music and Ghirahim being still Ghirahim ("Used to...I am") though all the charakter changes.

Third, I always find the second book of a trilogy more "boring" in terms of action and stuff but I get the feeling that it has to be this way. AND I always love the third part the most...sooo I am waiting.

Till next time

Have fun with this sugar-fueled spazzy rant. I apologize beforehand.

Congrats on your EMT classes! I’m starting the LVN program myself in the fall. I’ll probably not be able to read or review regularly, but know that I’ll eventually read every chapter. :) Also, my sciencey brain appreciates your medical research.
Thoughts! I have them. Occasionally. Sometimes I have to wait for my brain to be awake and articulate before I can review. :P Otherwise it’s just “hi me like story write moar plz”, and I feel like the author put in a crap ton of work and deserves more than that.
Aww, poor Link. I want to hug him. He needs a hug.
Why on earth does Ghirahim STILL think he’s weak? The incessant insecurity is driving me nuts. Marissa! Kiss him or something so he’ll feel better! I think he loves her, or is starting to. He’s a lil bit dependent on her for emotional stability, but sometimes he gets in a mood and doesn’t like being dependent. So he has mood swings. But he’s not weak. Emotionally unstable, yes. But who wouldn’t be in his place? Everyone keeps turning out to be evil or manipulative. :P
Oh shoot I forgot about Herb no fart don’t cry noooo. . . *sniff* Darn it. Quit makin’ me FEEL things, woman!
*squeal* Why is the finger-touching so adorable?
Ahh yisss he plays piano! Thirty points to Ghirahim. Imagining music scenes like this makes me happy. :) I absolutely adore it when people are musically inclined.
Wow, he’ll actually be able to use both eyes at the same time now. Does their hair actually grow? Or does it just stay the same. . .is this haircut permanent? Will there be FANART of this haircut? Many questions. . .

Favorite character? Hmm, Leal or Herb. Herb. Definitely Herb. But thinking about him saddens me because you killed him. -_-
I relate to your writing schedule. I’ll sit down one day, decide to write a story, write five completely unrelated scenes and several detailed character profiles, then the inspiration will dissipate and I’ll be left staring at my own story like “where did all those ideas come from I’m like a dry sponge now.” I’ll not go off on that now. I have a tendency to rant, in case you haven’t noticed. (I’ll bet you noticed.) ;)

Good luck to you and your muse. See you in the next book. :) Have a good summer!

Dang it... book endings always make me emotional. Although I’m excited for the next and final part, I’m still sad to see the slow burn go. I loved this book in its entirety. From the character development to the plot twists, it was just so good (Also any mention of Herb still breaks my heart!). Can’t wait for the next chapter! Even when I leave my country and live the experience of a lifetime for a year this August, I know I’ll still be reading every new chapter. Thank you so much. :)

Hey, idk if I've ever commented on this tbh, but I think I've been keeping up for the past two or three years (maybe more, I lose track of time lol) but I just want to let you know I'm really proud of you and your writing and I can definitely see how your writing has improved over the years, the little details in your writing that make it feel real, and I love the character development in this. I've been keeping up intermittently, especially during school when I get email notifications about updates to the story, but never find the time to sit down and read new chapters. I thought I was going to lose track of the story and never finish, but I just binge-read all the chapters I missed during the school year. okay im getting kind of rambly now, but again, im really proud of your work and growth as a person and an author :)

Omg. Dare you cut his hair! It's what made him fabulous! I am unsubbing!

Oh wait... This ain't YouTube...

Unless his hair had grown the last few chapters, I don't think I can imagine it differently.

Love the story. Keep it up!

*screams into void* I WASN'T READY! God, I love this story. You truly have a talent for writing. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. I've been surprised at every turn. I. Need. MORE. Haha. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your beautiful story with us all. I await the next book with much excitement!

Oh! Favourite character, GHIRAHIM, of course, d'uh. XD