Personally i think it would be great to continue this for a little longer, because I think Korra and Mako sneaking around with each other has some interesting potential. This fandom is pretty saturated with those particular fics with asami involved, and it goes well, except I like asami and it makes me sad that she gets screwed over - would be nice to see that kind of fic with a faceless billionaire douchebag as the "cheated on" person. Does that make sense?

But yea, Makorra sneaking around is pretty entertaining, considering theyve got super powers and shit to help with it (imagine korra earthbending mako through a wall because someones knocking on the door, or earthbending a chair aorund herself to hide, or waterbend-diving out of a window). So you should totally run with it.

I definitely see potential in this piece. not sure how far you'd take it though. i could honestly see it being only one more part or maybe see it turn into a 9 chapter thing. if you ever want help just pm me and we can brainstorm id love to be a beta if you need one :)

I really like this fic, and it does have a lot of potential. Personally I would like to know what's going to happen with Korra and her so called boyfriend, if Korra visits Mako that night, what are Mako and Korra going to do, and maybe some more you're going to think of along the way. :) If you decide to leave it as it is, then that's fine because it's a great one-shot, but if you decide to continue this I'll definitely going to read it. :)

Well I really enjoyed this a lot a really cute Makorra smut fanfic aw I wish it wasn't just 1 chapter long :( Super cute! :D