I hate how you annoying Lucy fantqrds always portray Natsu as some insensative moron when he is actually one of the smartest and emotionally aware when it comes to other people's promises. 0/10

I really liked this story! I don’t think it was too wordy. Awesome job!

heartwarming and typically Natsu.

A cute One-Shot
Love It!

So lovely and nice, with that hurtful piece. It was so perfect!

Aww

Awwwwwww! That was so sweet! I even got a little teary-eyed! Great work; I really enjoyed it!

The ending was amazing:)

Ugh, I think I lost all my teeth from cavities. That was so so sweet and so so perfect.

Poignant. Lovely work as always.

Hey this was really good! everyone perfectly stayed in character, which made this awesome. The ending was tied together flawlessly. Bravo

So cute

Ah. Another wonderful story. I feel like you really grasped Natsu's and Lucy's relationship perfectly. I really like it when a character is captures so well. Natsu's attempts to get through to Lucy and the fact that the only one he didn't think to try was the most obvious one was so Natsu. If that makes sense? And the fact that telling Natsu about her mother is what brought Lucy around is very believable. Story telling and her mother are two of Lucy's favorite things. It was perfect. Natsu may be clumsy, but he always knows just what to say to make someone feel better. You know, once he knows what's wrong that is.