I'm guessing your not gonna update this again are you?

Can you update

i really hope you are okay:(

Thanks for the chapter is this story still going on I'd like to read more of it please update again

This is... Decent.

I mean, it seriously needs to be revised, rewritten so that it's more coherent and understandable. But the concept itself is pretty damn good. I hardly ever see any stories about gijinka Pokemon in other universes, so this started off great. But reading further into it is pretty hard, and I have little to no idea what is happening.

It's a good story so far! Hope u can update soon

Very cool.

Meh. Why can't somebody just keep pokemon as pokemon?

I am dearly enjoying this story.
Its quite amusing to see such a
powerful pokemon be dragged
around by, compared to him,
children. XD

I love this i really hope groudon shows the crew his really form maybe primal near the end of choures

I wish you can add Kyogre and Rayquaza in here.

I really like this fanfic! Hope you continue it!

Cool!

Update already!

I wonder what Groudon's reaction to Brook, the Thriller Bark, and Brook's bitter-sweet past will be like. And will he sing and/or dance to the song Bink's Brew? Only time will tell thou, would it.