Reviews for Triumph
Dragon lover chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
This is just amazing!
The emotions are so real! I love how this actually ends happily instead of all the death fanfictions I've been reading. This is detailed, amazingly written, and just plain awesome. Also, I really like Wally. He is personally one of my favorite characters in Pokemon.
(And that slugma, it's just like "You came to the WRONG neighborhood!" XD)
Paradigm of Writing chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
This was absolutely amazing!
IcyAngels452 chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
This was great! Wally is my favorite rival ever. He's not cocky or annoying, just adorable :D
Triple Magnet chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
I loved it! You portrayed Wally and May so well! I'm a little disappointed it wasn't longer (maybe because I loved how it was wrote) but regardless I'm sure that this is one of the best fics I've red here yet! I can't wait to see more from you man (not that I'm expecting anything crazy) but I know it'll be good regardless!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
This was very well done. I liked how you added in some extra information like Wally going to Fallarbor and meeting the blonde man. Although I do wish you added how Wally got his Mega Pendant.
And you're so right! Wally deserves more, he's definitely one of the best rivals, and my personal favorite. I really hope he becomes more popular!
I also really loved how ambiguous you made the end. It gives the reader the chance to decide for themselves whether they want to follow the actual story or be nice to the poor guy.
Nice job!
Someone chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Thank you! Really! I was expecting that someone would write some nice story about Wally, because most of the stories I read about Wally had yaoi, angst, or him dying... And that's a bit disrespectful with him, because he's a nice character who that keep trying very hard to achieve success, despite his family dissaproving it, his illness, and the player who keep kicking his ass.

Anyway, I liked this fanfiction very much. Please, if possible, write more stories about him! I know that you'll do very good job!

And sorry about my bad english, I'm still learning how to speak.
Huinari chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
That's absolutely beautiful. Especially where Gallade is happy at the choice he made.
N-Badger97 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
This was a really nice story, I think you hit Wally's personality spot on. I also think you got May's cheerfulness down as well. I think you should expand on this story and make your own novelization of ORAS, maybe with Wally as the protagonist, because I really did get the Hoenn feel in this story.
Great Job!
Illusions of Insanity chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
YOU DID IT YOU ACTuALLY WROTE SOMETHING FOR ORAS TODAY I AM SO PROUD OF YOU

This is so cute! It is SO hard to find stuff for Wally these days, which is a terrible shame. I hope that with these remakes coming out, we'll have a bit more in the ways of Wally fics. I loved how you mapped out his personal growth along with Ralts' growth, that really makes me happy to see that sort of thing. I love the determination Wally has, as well as the caring nature Ralts has towards Wally. Overall, they make a great duo!

Great job, Night! This is really a great piece to kick off ORAS!