i bloody love this story i won't lie, it makes me some what sad to not see it be continued, i read this once back before i actually had this account on this site, completely forgot my old name... _ but i really would love to see this story continued one day. hope all is well.
~Ryan

Hey i really enjoyed this and wanted to ask you if you could add something in the following episodes

K so get Jenny and Brian back together marking Z jealous and then when Jenny has to leave again Brian's heart gets shatterd and Then he goes out with Z (ps this is a REALLY shortened down version

Awesomesauce, dude! Incredible writing!

There aren't many Brian D / OFC fan fics out there, but I am glad to have found this one! I think it's a good idea that you want to pace their relationship, don't rush it. And yeah, I agree that Z and Sheriff should date awhile, but like most teenage romance it won't last or something comes between them, and then that is when Brian swoops in for his chance! Lol

Sorry. I know that you haven't updated in almost a year, but I do hope you decide to continue with this some time in the future. Please don't give up on it.

Keep up the great work!

I know that you're probably not going to see this Bc you don't update the story anymore. I just wanted to get it off my chest. You are an incredible writer dude. When I'm reading I feel like I'm watching a fourth season! I can picture the characters doing everything you write perfectly. The story is so great. If I could just give imput, i think that sheriff and Zelda should be a thing. I think you should make Brian start to fall for her but now she's caught up on sheriff. And you def should incorporate Jenny into here somewhere, if you ever do update the story. Okay hope you see this !

Really good story that sticks to the story but doesn't seem like a copy of what fans of the show have already seen. Keep up the good work!

I really think u should have Jenny show up for a few chapters. Really great work

I think that Sheriff's crush on Zelda is too adorable to ignore.
Personally, I think that Sheriff and Z should be together.
(Brian can go screw Cheeto or Jenny's Skype account)
(Sorry, that was immature)
(Actually, I'm not sorry, He can go screw Cheeto AND Jenny's Skype)

IS IT BAD THAT I SHIP ZELDA AND SHERIFF?! CAUSE IF IT'S BAD, I DON'T CARE
(I know that this story is Zelda x Brian but oh well)

I love your story

This story basically made me officially start reading fanfiction. I loved it so far and am going to continue reading as well. I couldn't wait to express my gratitude, so I wanted to write a review here without finishing reading the other chapters. :)

I love this story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

great story, i can't wait to see the next update, i hope you will continue to keep writing this amazing story

great story i hope i will see a new chapter soon?!

great story, i hope you will continue it