I cried when i started reading the first ending so i chose the second one. It still seemed a little sad but atleast she was free from that psycopath and the Stockholm was cured(?) Great story 11/10

Ps lol at uthgerd for losing a leg also like for real cmon xD

I personally would probably read any of those 3, or all of them. Though I'd like to see Dovahkiin/Irileth the most out of those.

I vote for sticks and stones.

Woo, atleast 2endings. So im quite satisfied actually. Your wrting is great, and your stories are damn great as well. So, im vouxhing for "Maid in Whiterun" gwehehe

Great ending(s) in a way they're both happily ever after (if you look at the first through my highly romantised eyes for sub/dom :P)

i really enjoyed reading this story, so thank you so much for making a sequel to the original, it was excellent.

As for your next story, im not sure, they all sound brilliant, but i think im leaning slightly towards the Irileth one.

This was quite short, I agree. However, I'm eager to see the end. I won't look at the comments, I'll leave the next story a mystery. My Congrats to the guy for a story the writer accepts, that doesn't happen often. Keep up the great work!

Eeeh. Im not sure im happy, knowing this story is sooooo very short, but still, im quite content with the quality of the chapters.

With the way this is going I gave a feeling it wont end with Elenwen becoming a good mistress and happily ever after.
Still a great story ik loving the direction

Always keep your word. I really, really hope you have her turn into work food, preferably in multiple peaces, but that's up to you. Keep up the great work!

Great chapter, i really enjoyed their interaction.
also i greatly like Elenwens internal thoughts. not a very good mistress at all :P

Yep. Mega bitch. It sucks that Esbern died, I liked him. I hope that Delphine finds the Dovakihn, it would be horrible to be a slave to Elenwen. Anyway, keep up the great work!

Great chapter, i cant wait for the next to see how things go regarding the reunion of them all. also this little forsworn and Esbern twist is interesting
Finally, is Delphine just looking everywhere but the one place the DB actually is/ damnn, she stupid.

I forgot what a bitch Elenwen was. You capture her personality well. Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I've been gone for the past week traveling on the break. Keep up the great work!

Damnnnn Lydia and Uthgerd made bad decisions, i wonder what will happen from here, and how it is just one big misunderstanding.

I think this story is going rather well so far.