OH COME ON, NARUMITSU?!

Tracy and Phoenix's desperation to get Polly back makes me tear up a bit. Time and time again in fanfics they seem to just treat him like a friend but never like family. Apollo deserves a family right?

I read this a long time ago, and stopped at Chapter 21. I bookmarked it so I could read it again later. Now, I continued, and, I just finished it. I didn't realize how close I was to the end, 'till now, especially how short the chapters were to me. Gosh, I wish I could've finished sooner, but at the same time, I'm glad I finished it now.

I love how the story turned out, and I loved how Apollo was a villian, and yet at the same time, the victum. It was a beautiful story, and I love how you came up with Apollo's backstory in this story-and the Pheonix/Miles moments and Apollo/Klavier moments, especially the Phoenix/Miles proposal... I loved all of it. All of it.

Apollo is my favorite character, and seeing his heart broken breakdown was... Well, heartbreaking, but I love it. Plus, seeing your version of his back story explored is very put very nicely... It was very heart warming, and at the same time, heartbreaking... Dude, I love you.

If you ever plan more, I might just log in, and follow. I love how this turned out... Very much...

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*massive applause* WOOOOOOOOOT! ENCORE! BRAVO! That was AWESOME to read through! I mean it! It had all the best pairings and everyone was in character and...and...ugh it was just GREAT! Fantastic story; this is going up with the crown jewels of fanfiction, for sure!

That was totally awsome!

It's been a wonderful adventure, and I wish it didn't have to end! I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story and I'm happy I stayed till the very end. Thank you for this story. I absolutely loved every moment of it!

PHANTOM YOU SON OF A BIIIIITCH! *others hold me back* LET ME AT HIM! I'LL RIP HIS GOD DAMN HEAD OFF! SHOW NO MERCY YOU GUYS! THIS CREEPER'S GOTTA GO!

...I get really into stories as you can see heheh...

*jumps up and down squealing* NARUMITSU WEDDIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!

Ah, starting to spot those name disappearances. Weird, wonder why FF is doing that...

YES! My all time favorite Ace Attorney story is coming to fanfiction! Good to see this one here, as well as tumblr, thanks for uploading it!

AHHHH WE'RE SO CLOOOOSE! I'm with Athena, I wanna knock that Phantom on his ass and murder him over and over for every person he's killed! Hurry and save Apollo everyone!

This chapter was epic

If I was there and Clay appeared I would probably yell at him for dying and leaving Apollo alone XD

Now Phoenix, Trucy told you to be nice to Mommy, didn't she?

The fact that you made Edgeworth 'Mommy' to Trucy gave this fic extra win points, BTW! X3