Reviews for First time to see the World
iamkur chapter 10 . 3/12
wait, i'm sorry.. grounded for an 89!?
Angie2002-01 chapter 26 . 8/19/2019
Noooo why was this so short! We only got to see a few months into the story i would’ve hope to at least see Sasuke and Sakura kiss at the end or something or tell us the romantic pairing with Sakura. Their was a little things we didn’t get to see that I had hoped to see and a lot of things left unsaid that now I feel like the story is not finished and only just started. Anyways I loved it!
Angie2002-01 chapter 5 . 8/18/2019
Sakura should kill Ami in some terrible way. Like humiliate her by showing her how much stronger she is than her or something than stabbing her to death. Idk I just want her to die painfully lol
AA-saku chapter 26 . 1/2/2019
My my. What an awesome story. Totally binged reading this for 2hours straight. You guys are the best. Am looking forward to read new stories from you guys.
oddends chapter 26 . 7/28/2018
I loved this story so much! I really wasn't ready for this to be over, like this was really well written even if you guys made a few errors along the way. This was better than I expected and please do continue to keep up the good work. Your ideas are really amazing and are something to be acknowledged for.
acetwolf94 chapter 26 . 6/19/2018
I LOVE IT! I wasn't ready for it to be over, though.
JyuneFuma chapter 16 . 5/26/2018
I've watched that anime.
The Solitary Tempest chapter 26 . 5/2/2018
This chapter is so touching! I am glad that Sasuke and Sakura are getting closer right now! Hopefully you will update soon!
The Solitary Tempest chapter 24 . 5/2/2018
Sasuke and Sakura's fight was so awesome and magnificent!
The Solitary Tempest chapter 10 . 5/1/2018
This is awesome!
zandehr chapter 7 . 1/4/2018
Sakura is such a bad-ass!
AnimeEverywhere chapter 26 . 12/6/2017
Hey guys~
Again, the plot from this story was very interesting in the beginning. Both Zabusa & Haku are so naturally portrayed, there were some scenes, where i had tears in my eyes _ (okay, i often get teary eyes while reading fanfics or mangas or while watching anime, BUT only if it's really touchy & well-written, i dare say so myself xD). Some scenes (mostly in the beginning) were a bit too rushed, but it doesn't disturb too much i guess, & you really only write the most essential things (I appreciate that a lot too). In the later half of the story, it was less interesting plot-wise, not sure why exactly. But that's the only thing i got to remark.
The ending was beautiful though :D I'm glad i read it all until the end~
Thanks for this touchy story!
Bye~ AnimeEverywhere
Shadow.nao chapter 26 . 8/10/2017
Please update!
JyuneFuma chapter 26 . 7/31/2017
I like it
SweetFudanshi chapter 26 . 7/22/2017
Yosh, 'least this was a long as chapter -
I'm looking orward for the next chapter too Author-Chan, sorry if I added some pressure... Plus, I just came back from eatin' pancakes as dinner :D
Fantastic story as alway Author-Chan~
Hopefully this story is a Kimisaku story, ya don't see a lotta those a lot... I just added some pressure didn't I?Gomen Author-Chan v.v
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