This is an awesome series please update soon

start writing 4 stories finish none. XD high lv LOL

Does this mean you are no longer continuing this story please continue it as it's an amazing story and one I really enjoy reading please let us know if it is being discontinued or not

Wait, where did he get this supposed blade? I mean considering TWO chapters ago, he could do NOTHING to stop a weakling like mizuki?... (Who is just plain PATHETIC) He hasn't really had TIME to get a blade. and he needed his "minions" to save him then. and Hinata now chopping through people when AGAIN, TWO chapters ago, couldn't even raise her voice, yet now can fight like a devil, has a sword from nowhere (the hyuuga don't USE weapons... They think their taijutsu is the end-all-be-all remember? She didn't even mention it LAST chapter)... And SOMEHOW both kids know sealing suddenly. Why not just tear apart the guards and king bare-handed for now? However, I do like the story, so I GUESS the walk could have been REALLY long, so they could got it all then.

That's silly, sasuke wouldn't notice an ATOMIC BOMB going off next door to him, unless it affected him DIRECTLY! Him noticing Naruto or hinata or such stuff as their FEELINGS? That's stretching the bounds of disbelief to the breaking point. He wouldn't NOTICE, let alone CARE! Also he admits naruto is STRONGEST in the academy?... You realize that means he admits naruto is stronger then him right? (another thing that WOULD NEVER HAPPEN), plus that means, THIS perks his curiosity, but somehow naruto FAILING the exam with that kinda power, is what? NORMAL? Yeah, that makes no sense either. Sorry, he's just NOT that observant and not that much of a THREE-DIMENSIONAL character, he's got "power, revenge, kill brother"... If something doesn't fit in one of those three categories, it's IGNORED... There are MANY instances of this throughout the first series. And before you say the "death" of a classmate shocked him into new behavior... He watched his family die, hearing that the class "fool" whom he always beat the crap out of was killed by a traitor would not do much at ALL. If ANYTHING, it would just tick him off that he had to wait ANOTHER week before he got put on a team and could train under a ninja!

Hope to read more soon.

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he ignored the flame unseelie completely

you should probably not use Google translate

is it too much to ask to use a few gaara based moves?

You've made it obvious each and every time you've referenced 26-lord pain, even the dragon kin dealio

umm no, hinata can see the tenketsu, all hyuuga can, she just can't see as deeply to see the smaller ones neji can.

you didn't, I haven't even finished the chapter and I'm like "no, don't tell me, oh dear god" you made him dovahkiin didn't you?

there is no way I will believe she is a tiefling, she has no horns, grey skin, or tail, and it's not a tiefling if she doesn't have those.

You really should give a sense of time passing at the start of each chapter instead of having it later
Uh, when did Naruto even meet Korra? You never mentioned it in a previous chapter other than Kari saying there were flame/fire unseelie nearby but Naruto ignored them to focus on getting his allies back when they were taking he Gnome city
I hope Haku is a girl and some kind of ice demon and that Zabuza is a real demon thus he got his nickname plus tazuna would help with repairs and construction since he IS a master builder
Then there is tsunami being a hot Milf, which I hope will lead to more and longer lemons
All in all, good chapter and I hope to see more soon

So much killing to do, oh so little time to do it in.