ugh my heart yo that dialogue bit in the end

This was great, I loved it! :D I think you described the awesome captain-first mate- relationship perfectly, and I imagine if something like this would happen they'd react like that. You got their characters really well :3 Bahaha, I know I shouldn't laugh but Franky's 'you pulled an Usopp on him' cracked me up. Ah, such powerful words at the end... that's right Zoro, there's your place and nowhere else. Nakama power :D

Thanks for sharing this

Great... I really liked ...! :D I love zoro...! Good story...
Have a nice day...!

I love your story :) great ;) it shows how luffy even changed a person like zoro with all his pride
but i think the 'real' zoro/ odas zoro would never draw a sword against luffy and odas luffy knows zoros endless loyality

It was very good. You did great, capturing the moment as they say.