Great! Love it so much!

Update soon, I look forward to the next part of the book! :))

nice!

nice!

Nice!

I cannot express how much I loved reading this fic! I absolutely *adore* Mina and I swear I feel like Sebastian from Ariel every time she’s having a sweet moment with Sokka. I love your pacing of the relations between the characters and how you’ve woven your OC into the story so seemlessly. I give you two thumbs up my dear author. :)

Umm I would like for you to know that this isn't the first chapter, it's chapter three: the southern air temple 3:/ \:0

I love how this is the first real time Aang lies. Love it

Your story is interesting so far, I'm
Looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.

Keep in mind your word choicing though. Most of it is good but here and there might have been better with somthing different. Such as discribr Zuko's eyes in the first or second chapter, it might have been better if you used Amber to save on word count

Other than that your story was topnotch, I'm
Enjoying the steady pace and charchter development.

Finaly, to my fallow reviewers.

Kindly remember to make your reviews worth somthing. Cratics and suggestion are worth a lot more than words of praise or demands for more (the later being potentialy damaging to the story and writer). When you write make sure when you write a review. It is actualy somthing that the writer can use and lern from
Arkilos

Interesting. I look forward to more.

im such a sucker for avatar oc stories and this one has been really well-written so far i like how you didnt just let zuko kidnap her there like they normally do and you seem to have your own twist that im looking forward to finding more about

Love it

Please have an announcement the wait is soo UGH

I cant figure it out. Is Mina going to have a relationship with Sokka or Zuko, update soon

Oooh~