| Reviews for Nora and Jaune are Platonic Friends |
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Guest chapter 5 . 6/21/2018 A www how sweet and cute |
jesdavi chapter 4 . 6/4/2018 Ok wait. So did pyrrha have feelings for Nora or was she into Juane? |
Lucy chapter 5 . 12/13/2016 I love how you incorporated Ren into this. I know it's weird but usually stories I've read, in which Ren or Nora are dating other people (and not each other,) authors write the two as if they don't really get along..or something. Like Ren is annoyed by Nora? IDK how to explain it. But I think you got it perfectly, and this was really cute. I never ever imagine Nora and Jaune together (Renora is my otp, gah!) but this entire fic was so good and your style was right up my ally. I loved it! Great job :D |
Darty 794 chapter 5 . 11/29/2016 ...I'm not crying, shut up! But seriously, I like how this ended (did it end?). Although, I feel the story itself was a little shaky. Chapter 1, Jaune and Nora bang. Chapter 2, Jaune and Nora bang after having a meaningful conversation on their relationship status. Chapter 3, Ren and P-Money know, with the former being cool and the latter being burned. Chapter 4, Nora and P-Dizzle go get burgers and come back with a baby order. Chapter 5, Nora has her baby, and they all live happily ever after, maybe? I feel like you could have gone deeper with this story, but it's all saved by that adorable ending. What can I say? I'm a sucker for first night parents. I give this 4/5. Entertaining, but it still lacking something. Keep up the good work! |
Darty 794 chapter 4 . 11/29/2016 I mean, yeah, that's going to happen eventually, right? |
Darty 794 chapter 3 . 11/29/2016 Wow... I was NOT expecting that to happen! |
Darty 794 chapter 2 . 11/29/2016 I'm having difficulty wrapping my head around this relationship myself, but I guess I'll just have to keep reading. |
Darty 794 chapter 1 . 11/29/2016 Is this gonna be another "Friends with Benefits" story? |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/26/2016 Super sweet. |
MIK23LIK chapter 5 . 12/31/2015 awwwwwwwwwwww my feels are so happy...this is happening...tears |
NugiSpringield chapter 5 . 11/30/2015 what? |
DarkDevilKnight chapter 5 . 11/6/2015 I suggest of making like a sequel to this story |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/2/2015 I want more please do a sequel |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2014 So much feels! *shed's manly tears* |
PrOxMURDER chapter 5 . 12/2/2014 Well, at such a juncture you have to options: leave it here and maybe add one or two things here and there, OR you could have a series of chapter regarding their life after such an event. Though being the writer you are, I'd expect you to have planmed ahead...no, wait I mean the exact opposite. No plans...yeah. 9/10 m8. Gg. |