I really enjoyed this, thanks for writing.

I read this in bed this morning, all curled up and smooshed, the perfect place for this lovely sweet story of their love. My favourite part was Castle's reaction to Kate's non toothpaste kisses, loved it.

Drop 'gotten' from your lexicon and your on your way.

I enjoyed this.

Good writing. Loved the chapter.

I could actually see the scenes play out, so if say you accomplished your goal. It was great!

I just LOVE it! You wrote it beautifully. Thank you so much for the story :)

This is lovely. Great work :)

That was really awesome, I am obsessed with caskett in this time period and you pulled it off really well! I quite like dialogue in stories but your experiment without it was still good! If you have dialogue in your other stories then I am definitely going to check them out! :) Bex

You definitely met your goal. It resurrected my sweet memories of days gone by. Well done.

I haven't read this yet but it sounds like EXACTLY what I've been looking for for ages, thanks you!

That was great

Really phenomenal story! Great job:)

I liked this story. Good outcome for this experiment.

Hey sorry I don't have much else to say but this was great. I liked it - I'm sure it's challenging writing something without dialogue and having to be descriptive without getting to flowery or seemingly living in a thesaurus. Thanks for writing, it was a nice little piece. :)