| Reviews for Road to Heaven |
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Madara Uchiha chapter 16 . 12/9/2019 I was hoping that there was some sequel to the fic ...or a continuation but seeing that it was last updated in 2017... I belive it's dead . I don't even know if you are even reading this message...but i want to say this to you ..." I, MADARA, DECLARE YOU ONE OF THE GREATEST" fanfic writers. I really liked Project Konoha as well but the thing i liked the most was your portrayal of Naruto in this fic. Man, i got giddy during the instances where you showed how cool he was. Anyway, good job man/woman and if you do find free time in your life i request you to continue Road to heaven , if it's not that much to ask. Buy bye |
kostigan chapter 13 . 2/21/2019 You're a great writer, really seems like you added a layer to the characters that fits them so well but also makes this story original. I hope you're still active and that you'll finish the story. |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/25/2018 Yo this is amazing please update soon |
Ferdiad chapter 13 . 5/12/2018 Naruto needs to fight Sasuke . |
SpikeyKun chapter 16 . 4/24/2018 Hey, really enjoyed this! Compelling storytelling, and really solid writing. Your characters are AU, but with enough familiar overlap that we can recognize hints of canon in them, and I really appreciate the shifting PoV's following the principal characters around. Some author's play with it, but it is very seldomly done well. Your main character isn't just Naruto, it really is a team seven fic with great interplay between characters, and plot twists done well. I liked this fic so much so, I went and read Project Konoha as well. Could see your growth as a writer. I'm honestly surprised that there aren't more people who've found and reviewed this. Seriously would love to see more. 5/5! |
Forowin chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 Fascinating story. Can't wait for an update! |
jerrbear16 chapter 16 . 7/28/2017 I can't believe I just now found this story. It is one of the best ones I have read on here. I Love the way you have chosen to develop the members of team seven and I can't wait to see what else you have. I hope we don't have to wait too long. |
Follow the Code chapter 16 . 7/28/2017 So I just read your story and I gotta say I'm thoroughly impressed. Your story is pretty damn original and despite having very little to do with cannon, it still draws the readers interests easily. Furthermore, I gotta applaud you for the way you write your OCs. Most of the time they are either shameless self-inserts for personal wish fufillment or characters that readers can't connect with because they are too overpowered yet nobody's ever heard of them [ie characters who are Madara level strong despite no backstory or mention prior, they just kinda appear]. However, you write each OC with reasonable strength levels for ninjas and you develop their characters pretty well for side-character [examples being Kohaku and Hiten and his wife]. This makes them memorable to the reader and not at all cringeworthy. Finally, I really love the way you develop the identities and personalities of our main protagonists, especially Naruto. You've kept all the main elements that we enjoy about his character [goofy, bright, optimistic, a sense of humor] yet also given him a keen eye for deduction and versatility. Even though we still really don't know how strong Naruto is on a combat- level we are made aware of his true power: his ability to understand people. This makes him an extremely adept spymaster, information gatherer, and infiltrator and is not an angle that many writers correctly exploit. I know I've written alot but I hope that just conveys my enthusiasm for this fic. I look forward to your next update. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/27/2017 I just really long this story |
Always Keep the Faith chapter 16 . 7/27/2017 Damn. You made me actually like an OC. Gonna miss Kohaku. |
Scarease chapter 16 . 7/26/2017 The only bloodlines I know of in Konoha are Uchiha ,Hyuuga ,and Kurama clan ? If you need Oc's let me now got a lot and some cool plots to if you are interested .with Oc's got plenty of allies and villains for team7 to take on. |
Scarease chapter 10 . 7/26/2017 Now this story get good and interesting. |
Sumeri chapter 16 . 7/25/2017 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I canNOT tell you how excited you make me everytime you update! i've made a playlist of epic music to listen to while reading this fic, for god's sake, and lemme tell ya it came in handy once again :D also, hnnnghhh hiraishin is my favorite thing ever i am flailing i can't deal asdfghjkmjfgds to sum it up, awesome work once again! |
Scarease chapter 2 . 7/25/2017 Interest so far will keep reading. |
Ecomadness chapter 16 . 7/25/2017 Finally an update! Been waiting ages for this and it was worth it! Good up the good work. |