I really enjoyed this story. It's funny, it's almost like you predicted what was gonna happen in the series *X-files the music plays.* You have a good grasp of the characters and their personalities, and I have to say you wrote this whole story very well.

Thanks for sharing this :o)

I hope the satellite operation restores Krei's fortune to what it used to be before Yokai's revenge.

Amazingly written. Really spot on. :) Say, would it be possible to do a follow up? Like, a sequel to this story?

An engaging read, and an interesting take on what might have occurred after the film. Thank you for the story. :)

I found one minor error I thought you might prefer I mention:
to wear Callaghan

*heart cracks*

I read this two or three times already and it still hurts me in the feels.
-casually goes to cry in a trash can-

Awwww. This mad my heart clench and ters water in my eyes, so emotional.

I liked how each visit had a distinct flavor.

Short and sweet epilogue of sorts. Good job.

-Zetsumei

I felt sorry for Callaghan ...but he deserves it the same...Poor Hiro... Callaghan he reaps what he sows...Abigail has lots trouble...you know I sometimes wondered did Callaghan ever care about Tadashi.

This definitely is realistic Abigail was nice to Hiro.

So sad ...the ending was sweet...I despise Callaghan for killing Tadashi a good brother and faithful friend to Hiro...but there is indeed no greater love than a parent and thier child...there is no doubt in my mind that he would've gone in that portal for Abigail.

Out of all of the visitations, I gotta say I enjoyed Abby's the most. Made me tear up a little bit :p.

I like this story-I may not have read many fanfictions involving Callaghan, but whenever I do, they usually don't take the time to explore how he feels after all this-seeing his daughter alive and realizing that his whole revenge quest has been all for nought, hurting everyone-not just the person who hurt him, but people who looked up to him, people who cared about him, people he loved or befriended, and even himself.

This fic brings some well-needed depth to Callaghan, whether for motives during the movie, or thoughts after it (and even brings a little character, or a little *more* character, to his visitors as well).