This is a very interesting story update soon please

I wish I could say I liked this story. I read from beginning to the latest chapter, even!
The fact of the matter though is that all that's going on is Percy being tortured by everyone, abandoned and betrayed with no endgame from what I can see other than for the sake of it. Add to this a snails pace for plot/character development, hopefully you see what I mean.

it kinda feels like he didn't watch any of the heroes of Olympus books (or read them ages ago and only knows the basic plot lines) as all his explanations are messed up and not at all with uncle Rick's canon.

anyone else notice the speech percy gave about Iapetus being slightly wrong? in house of hades, when Bob falls down to help Percy and Annabeth, he gains his memories but realises the 2nd chance he's been given and chooses to be good and be Bob, the explanation the author should have given was that, when Bob and Damasen the friendly giant sacrificed their lives to let them close the doors of death, they along with the other titans that were sucked up into Tartarus's vortex face were revived into their original evil forms, so Bob is no longer Bob but Iapetus.

I suggest that you use a line break orto seperate the scenes

Oh Tartarus... if only you knew...

Oh yes mother nothing shows love more than torturing me, and trying to get me to send my soul to oblivion to host one of your brothers lol

Update

It’s ok this was a good book but all things come to an end

why would percy want to save the gods?Let them die

great prophecy

thought the Titan would be Pallas or perses for sure oh nvm god you are confusing. you make Tartarus fear him for his power and now he can barely handle ONE titan Pallas is right he is weak for a son of the goddess of nigjt and if night told Erebus about him being adopted he wouldn't be so mad...

a primordial with demigod level power of water is really pathetic

I don't mean to be mean when I say this, and I'm just being truthful even if the truth hurts, but there is a big gap between the skill level of TheGoossMaster and you. I'm sorry, but it's just the truth. It is easy to see when the original story by TheGooseMaster ends and when your writing begins. Even in saying that, your writing isn't terrible, but you can tell the difference from the big increase in typos to the huge change in writing style. I do still hope that you continue. I still did like the last 2 chapters, but I loved the first 10.

Fuck you