I fucking love this fanfic. You are a phenomenal writer

I wish thre wasmore to this

This is lovely, you made me love Team Rocket even more now, and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise.

Though I have to admit this is very different from other similar theories I've seen yet.

This is amazing! It’s so beautifully written, and every time you say he’s ten, I just, it’s just, wow!

Oh lord, this is so, so good. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Dang. That was... I can't find the words. This is a gem. It's glorious. (I found words now.) It's amazing. Thank you for writing this. Thank you.

Is kinda heartbreaking when you read it the second time

Hello! I'm not sure if the review where I asked if I could read this story aloud and post it to tumblr went through with my username on it, so here it is! I'm bibliophilea, and I would love to read this amazing story aloud and post it to tumblr with credit and a link back to it, but only with your permission. (::

This story is amazing. I love it so much. And I'm reviewing on anon because I've already reviewed this story, but I wanted to ask you a question. Would you be alright with me reading it aloud and posting it on tumblr, with credit to you and a link back to this story?

That was so good. Thanks for the existential crisis, friendo.

...woah

I came here prepared to be completely and utterly thrashed. I was not disappointed.

Well this was unexpectedly painful. Ow. But really nice too. Kind of poetic. Thanks for sharing!

This is brilliant. I never followed Pokemon very closely when I was growing up - I was content with listening to my friends go on about it, and going off and doing my own thing. And this is absolutely gorgeous and brilliant. I normally don't read much fanfiction outside the fandoms I normally frequent. But this is brilliant. I love it. Thank you for bringing it into the world. And for putting it in a place where I could find it. This is brilliant.

Ash is ten and will always be so,he shouldn't think about the future should he?