So you’re going to have his wives FORCIBLY have Harry tell them his darkest secrets when he is not ready? Fuck off

this is a decent fic, but it needs work, a lot of this seems really rushed and jammed together. and quite overly convenient.

Hope you still continue with this story, it has become one of my favorites.

you used delecour twice,once with Daphne and the other with fleur

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

This looks like a real good tale! I look forward to reading the whole story. Thanks for writing it!

Hey you seem to struggle with keeping the names straight in the contract negotiations not trying to be rude or anything just thought you might have missed some spots in editing

Great job i just read them all so far! I have a couple questions though two involving luna and two involving dumbeldore. Did harry give luna or let her see the two creatures he brought back from avalon? And did he give her the book like he was supposed to? Also did harry get the picture of his mom and dad back from whereever dumbeldore hid it like he was going too. And did harry or will he find grindelwald’s horcrux dumbeldore hid? Any way please answer these questions next update or at least tell me if they will be answered later. Thank you and please update soon on both this series and the soul bond and snakes series please. I just read them both in the soan of a day and am really excited to know what comes next. Thank you :):)-N

Love it! I hope you'll continue it. Thx for sharing your talent! Hope more comes soon! Thank you the effort during these trying times. Take care of yourself.

A bit late to the party, but well.

There is something wonky with the signing of the contracts. The Greengrass contract states that the second child shall be a delacour. The bones states that the second child shall also be a bones.

other than that, enjoying this one.

wow, interesting story love it and way it going a good job I don't mind the slow pace and your doing very well.

Awesome, maybe a wee bit to many twists and turns and whatnot. But it's your story so tell it as you want. But didn't Harry want his parents paintings from Drumbledore? Aanyway, looking forward to see if you find your muse for this one again. / Slaintë, up the irons.

thank you for the update looking forward to new chapters.

Hey man! Just read the sample of the book on kindle store. Amazingly written. Keep it up!

As I am already invested in this and a couple of other works so as going as it sounds I'll wait until you finished this before anything. It's been going on for a while