| Reviews for Nakhash |
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Guest chapter 15 . 11/23/2015 Will you ever come back to this? It's an amazing story and id love to know more about Draco and Astoria and different magic. You bring your characters to life and it feels very real. |
dancinginthesunlight chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Wow I loved this chapter. Calling manischewitz "bad wine" had me cracking up, as did "no one cares about Chanukah." I will say that making sparks and tearing up paper on Passover is not strictly allowed, since you can't use fire or tear things on a holiday, but if the Golds are not particularly observant or as you seem to indicate are Reform, then I can see that being a fun tradition for wizarding families. |
bleeb90 chapter 15 . 5/8/2015 Lovely one shots. I like the character David Gold. This one, and the original fic were enjoyable reads. I especially liked the idea of a different magic with a different culture or language. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 15 . 1/9/2015 AMAZING chapter as always dawww... and yay she knows! keep up the good work as always |
Renata MM chapter 14 . 1/7/2015 Poor Harry between two brilliant kids. At least he is having to be smarter than canon. But I doubt this with Ron's bad influence. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 14 . 1/5/2015 AMAZING chapter as always. ...i'm getting a FMA feeling about the stone... anyway, keep up the good work as always |
Cris chapter 14 . 1/5/2015 Too much Ron, but lovely. I hope you write more about it. But pretty please, with a Sirius that love Harry even if he is a Slytherin. About the making of a PS, it's just to go to Africa at any time. |
GuesssWho chapter 14 . 1/5/2015 That explains a lot about the Stone, actually . . . |
Renata MM chapter 13 . 12/31/2014 Very beautiful and very sad. But I can imagine how fun it was to you write in Shakesperian English. I was very happy when I read in chapter 12 that you are planning to write the AU about Harry and David meeting first. I always thought that Harry would became friend of the first person to act friendly with him. I saw a few videos by the only1noah and understand what you wrote about. What you think about having your stories translated in another idiom? I would like to try this and translate The Rebels Snakes and Nakhash to Portuguese. I'm reading more in English that in Portuguese, but I never translated anything. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 13 . 12/30/2014 AMAZING chapter as always well worth the wait. keep up the good work |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 12 . 12/24/2014 AMAZING chapter as always Merry Christmas! keep up the good work as always |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/18/2014 Brilliant, as always. I would like to see a post-war Harry and Neville. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 11 . 12/18/2014 AMAZING chapter as always, well worth the wait. not much to say, other than well done... keep up the good work as always |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/6/2014 I really Love it. A few parts are to much canon for my tastes but still is brilliant. I dont like Hermione in most the fics, but yours as seen by David is amazing and lovely. I'm a big fan of Daphne Greengrass, or at least some fanons versions of her, so I wasn't very happy with the way you portraied her. And I dislike Malfoy too so... But I liked the druidic magic. And I absolutely loved the scenes with Clearwater and Malfoy. I laughed very much. |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 10 . 12/5/2014 AMAZING chapter as always thanks! keep up the good work as always |