This is so sad, really and the idea with the garden, it's quite interesting!

How they gradually grow closer and Sabo finally helps him to grow something, so wonderful but those last lines... I wanted to cry.

I enjoyed reading it a lot, so thanks for writing this story!

The last line killed me.
I seriously am finding it hard to breathe because my heart won't stop hurting. Oh author, how could you do this to me. And those few lines hinting at a different world, and that feeling of hope and despair all mixed together... That was gold.
Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

*wails like a child* Poor Sabo! He shouldn't be left there. I love this! *stops crying and stars appear in my eyes* It would be really cool if you made a sequel with Sabo and Ace older and they meet again but this time Ace is stronger and can take Sabo someplace else where they both can be free.

This is sad and gorgeous and I love it

Also, this is not my ancient history nor my NaNoWriMo and I should not be doing this but I really want to keep reading your stuff.

awwwwwh that was so sweet