Thnx for finishing the story. I think it turned out really cute. :3

Hello! ~ That was a cute chapter, though the smut wasn't very descriptive. Like you said though, it had been awhile. So, I forgive you. Towards the beginning of the smutty part the characters were a bit ooc and the smut was quite non-descriptive. However as you got further and further along it became much better. Um, I have enjoyed this chapter and I am looking forward to the next one.

Love, Kat! 3

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER I CANT LIVE WITHOUT IT! MY OTP IS YUKI X KYO! I NEED TO SEE THIS MOVIE SCENE! PLEASE CONTINUE! YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD!

Please make more chapters

I really like where you are going with this. It's cute and fluffy and aghhh. :3 I just really really like it. Um. I am excited for next chapter. There better be a lot of cute cuddling. *laughs evilly* All of the cuddling. But seriously. Next chapter they should cuddle and makeout. That would be perfect. 3 There is your review dear. Now please commence writing. I beg you. *I get down on my knees and throw myself to the ground, pleading for you to write the cuteness that will be the next chapter*

I found it nice. Stereotypical horror movie can be funny and romantic XD

Please continue this! I love it! I cant wait until the next update!

Aaawwwwww that ending was adorable

Eeeep eeeeep eeeeep! I'm soooo sorry for all of my mistakes in chapter 5's review. I feel really terrible about it. Here I am giving you tips on how you should proofread, when I forgot to proofread. *sighs* I'm sorry.

That was really cute. I kind of hope they make out... Hehe, sorry. I'm just a bit of a fangirl. You wanted a real review though right. One that gives you criticism and praise and such? Well I'm reading through the chapter again to search for stuff. Your sentences and dialogue flow really well. I mean you use short, medium length, and long sentences and you don't start every sentence with 'The', 'I', or 'He'. :P Um. One thing I found was the part where Kyo replies to Yuki saying, 'It was. I hate remembering it though." Yuki had ended his last sentence with though, so you you could have had Kyo say something like, "It was, but I hate remembering it." Or just something like that to get rid of the second though in a row. Hehe that ryhmed. :3 Kay. Now I'll go re-read the second half. Okay so I found a no no paragraph. I just looked at it and went no no no no no. Okay. You started 8 sentences in a row with the word 'he', we can't have that. It was the paragraph starting with, "He looked at the top drawer of his bedside desk". Don't feel bad about it though, cause I do that too sometimes. Whoops, but, just know to look for that kind of stuff when you edit before posting. Um. Other than that Yuki is a little ooc during dialogue, but the rest was really good. :D Awesome work! 3

...I squealed and awwed at the same time...and I really hope you can update soon...will any one else beside Yuki find out acciddently if at all?

Hehe I'm a sucker for yaoi lol yeah I find this particular pairing adorable and I think as long as I can I'm gonna keep cheering you on as each chappie comes up I am working on reading 6 or 7 other fanfics right now as well as work so I'll do the best I can . I just can't help that walmart is where you go to have a taste of hell and having your soul sucked from ya lol

You really need to update really soon I quite enjoybthe story and I think it has potential

keep going its really good

Please update quickly I actually like this fanfic, hard to find good ones now a days, Please hurry