Reviews for Second Time Around
Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2018
The next chapter didnt come out on friday...and its behind by some 4 years lmao Plz keep them coming...I love the esdeathxtatsumi paring.
lonesome silence chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
Please update your story is awesome
Mayonaka no taiyo chapter 2 . 8/19/2017
Interesting concept. I look forward to seeing more of this.
edboy4926 chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
Good chapter
Keep on going
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Interesting intro
Master Xehanort chapter 2 . 11/7/2016
I love it so keep going my friend and can Tatsumi meet Esdeath next chapter?
Viro Blade chapter 2 . 7/11/2016
Don't stop now. Keep going. It's getting good.
Thicc Jesus chapter 2 . 6/4/2016
Really like the plot so far.
Death seems cool, and the pace is good.
Keep going, man!
I know it's been a while since you've updated this fic. But it's good, man...
Good luck
desdelor97 chapter 2 . 4/3/2016
This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.
Road walker chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
UPDATE ALREADY ITS BEEN SEVERAL YEARS I WANT TO SEE THIS STORY FINISHED!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2016
Please update
Iamnew chapter 2 . 12/30/2015
i cant take this seriously dude. You wrote yourself wrong when this was made. Tatsumi, if he was anything like a trained assassin sent back in time he would
a) train, edese cmon man he has to go fight her he knows this
b) have a shitload of experience, even if he was a newb(he isn't hes an assassin warrior) ieyasu would only equal of the tatsumi of the same age mentally so if tatsumi went back hes already several plus months of training at least
c) definitely beat ieyasu cause of armor, not to mention if he's not used to his body there is the training experience don't try to be stacking favors by exaggerating weaknesses it makes you like you don't know what you're doing which you don't.
fix this chapter and please dont go to the stereotypical powers if he has this armor is he gonna beat ppl with it is he gonna beat ppl w/o it and there's the whole time travel thing. Is he gonna tell anyone? plz go back and read your product try not to cringe at it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2015
Please update
darkchannel30 chapter 2 . 10/14/2015
can you please update I want to see what happens next
ElizaSn00w chapter 2 . 9/22/2015
I know it's been a year since your last update... but I really love your story so far :3 And... I love EsdeathxTatsumi and... it annoys me that both died so... pwetty pwease? :3
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