I would love to see where this story continues going. I love the way Miles and Bass were there from the beginning.

Wonderful. Would love to read more.

That was a great chapter hope you update soon!

I hardly ever read fan fiction and when I do, I certainly never comment or review the work. However, I have to say this is one of the best written pieces I've ever read. Usually, stories are rushed, grammer (or, lack there of) is terrifying and the overall premise is weak. But you were able to twist the story into something of your own and still keep the unique personalities of the characters. You couldn't tear me away from reading this one. Great job.

I am really enjoying this reworking of the story. I love the way you are weaving all of the different plot points in. - B

Your story is amazing !

It sounds so much fun ! I am ( and I'm going to be) enjoying this very much ! Thanks a lot for sharing !

Oh so good, I look forward to more.

I'm glad that Jeremy offered to stay with Maggie and Aaron I still can't tell you how much I love you for saving Maggie ( Charlie's real mom in my opinion). When Bass stood up to Miles because of how he was yelling at Charlie...what a man :) Miles may be his brother, but Charlie is the love of his life. Of course Miles apparently has known for the past couple of years that Bass had it bad for Charlie. Lol. I love that you kept very true to the show, but I am extremely happy that it was Bass who went with Charlie to catch the train.

I can't wait to see what happens next...do they take Nora to Drexel? I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

I for one am not going to object to Bass being the one to save her...lol this chapter was great. :)

Hi Ice... Really enjoying this :) Neville as the big bad, ?Miles and Nora, Jeremy and Maggie, and of course - Bass and Charlie, will there be a big showdown between Bass and Nate/Jason? Can't wait to see where you take this :) cheers, Magpie

Bass should have thrown a log at Nate's head! hahaha Great chapter. This was a nice update and it is clear that you put a lot of work into keeping it parallel to the show whenever possible. Looking forward to seeing how you save Danny (assuming you do). Can't wait for the next update. - Lemon

Okay, first thanks for the dedication! What a kickbutt present (though it could habe been topped by you sending David Lyons to my doorstep. I will accept him anytime, there need not be any holiday of any sort, btw.) Second, stop beating yourself up. It's only Saturday. I'm not that uptight about my birthday. Third, I loved it. Like absolutely loved it...I don't know if it was intentional or not but thanks for focusing on my holy trinity and that sappy, sarcastic group hug. Loved it SO much. Protective Bass is one of my favorite things ever. So thanks for all the Charloe moments. I may have awwed and ooohed a couple times. I can't tell you how much I loved this update. You know Devo is just all things perfect to me, so there are never complaints just giddiness and a pressing need for more (tho, feel free to kill Rachel and I'll give you a weekend with DL if I ever possess him. I'm just sayin'.)

Fourth, should anybody know the lyrics to Kumbaya? Seriously, though.

Fifth, please, Ice, can I have some more please?

I can't wait for more

Are u ever coming back?