*sighs in contentment* that was so cute :')

this read like poetry. elegant and dark

This was stunning. I loved every word of it, amazing, simply amazing. How this didn't place is beyond me!

That was beautifully written. Very nice. Reminds me of the GaLe art when she's an angle, and he's a demon. Lovely.

I think it works just fine as a fanfiction. :) I actually think it really fits for Gajeel and Levy's relationship; you did a really great job. It fits quite well with who they are I think.

I liked it. Could clearly see the scene and feel for the characters. Really great, thank you for putting it up. It should have placed, definitely.

*claps hands slowly and then all at once*

This is so beautiful -starry eyed-

I am sorry to hear that it didn't place but this works beautifully for Levy and Gajeel! The descriptions were perfect and I loved all the metaphors. I almost felt like I was reading poetry. It was wonderful!

Beautiful story. I'm a bit speechless right now. I love this story (and the other ones written by you that I've read). Spectacular job.

Loved it!

This was beautiful. The descriptions read like poetry, yet still accurately described the characters themselves. loved it

Beautiful!

I wish I had something constructive to say, but this was just perfect. The word choice was so powerful and compelling, it sucked me right in and dragged me along right to the end. This is beautiful.

Adorable! I love it.