Forgot this came out too. Sorry I'm so late. Depression and work and a vacation and stuff.

I laughed when I read that "figures it took a man falling from the heavens to get Nel Zelpher to change."

I felt a great big D'awwww from hearing Claire's feelings progress. Then it got deliciously devious reading about how Nel was oblvious to her rivals.

This was great. Very well written to me, but maybe I'm biased. I'm also at work, so I'm not thinking as deeply as I usually would. I liked the perspective and how you wrote certain things "She has been waiting long. She says she hasn't" complete awwww! I don't have the words available right now to disect exactly why writing like that is appealing to read. But it's darn cute. It's some weird combination of past and present that tickles my mind to realize. Makes me think I guess.

Whoa whoa! Stroking his jaw? Come one Fayt how do you not pick up on that immediately. People don't typically touch one another than intimately, no matter how "friendly".

Good A/N analysis. I never realized.

Well, this was fun. Yeah, I can see how this wouldn't exactly fit in the bigger fic you have, but I'm still entertained and glad you wrote this. You did good mate.

Awesome one shot.