nice and steamy!

Beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

It's really cool how this starts of with a sex game where the sexual relations have no relation to real life, but for every chapter it is hinted more and more that perhaps it doesn't have to be fantasy.

My favourite chapter id the one where they try out the implausible position with Zack, Cloud and Angeal. I also really like the way you eded that chapter with laughs and respectfully ingrain the result of the whole endeavour.

Well, shit. This fic is great. Apart from the amazing sexiness it is super well written. Totally read chapter 15 twice. Thanks for writing!

This was really cute! I do hope you continued it...

Wasn't Cloud supposed to look somewhere a bit lower than Zack's lips in that position?

This broke me... So fuvking good! Thank you so much for making this :)

Awww, please don't change this. I know you don't like it, but it sort of hit Trashy in a Good Way on the head. I mean hello, Zack wrestling Zack down and getting sexy rough with him? HELLO, instant mood improver. XD

You are evil. Deliciously evil. D

I've seen stories here and there of the five of them all in a five-some relationship with each other, but I haven't expected to see anyone crazy enough to attempt to write the -process- of the five of them coming together into this crazy relationship...and actually pull it off... And the catalyst was a R18 dating sim of all things... I love it D

Very impressed that you've continued to write through all these years, and I'm VERY glad for it )

Lovely way to end the story!

man that was good, really good. :)

Aw, asreon, I'm so happy to see these boys be happy but so sad at the same time to see this winding down. Can't wait for the epilogue. :)
""And I don't know what you're planning, but orgies are a lot more awkward and difficult than a certain sex game would make them seem."

Cloud laughed at that. "I wasn't planning anything!"

Angeal moved lower to nuzzle at Cloud's throat. "That's a shame. I was.""
Ugh Angeal is so SEDUCTIVE the way you write him. Just, touchy and nuzzly and big and tactile and mmm. Love him. You do such great work - be proud of this!

Finally! *jumping like I'm crazy* Woohoo! They've finally reached the point, where they've admitted their interest in each other. I'm so happy!

Positively cannot wait for the next part! Thank you!

Argh teasing cliffhanger! Love this story and looking forward to more :)