This. Was. Perfect. It encapsulated Shaw in a way I didn't think could be done so succinctly. At least not by those who didn't create her. And most importantly, it fit THEM.

Ahhh love it! What a genius way to show that Shaw cares and loves Root. Brilliant!

Beautifully written... thanks!

The best fnfiction about shoot. you capture the way that they really are and the dinamic between both of them. a very truly love story

Haha. Love this scene. Makes sense for them as well. Nice job

I love.. it!
this is the first Shoot fanfic i've read.. so thanks for making it memorable!

Seriously, I've no idea what to say.
This is just..
This is..
wow.. really good!

When I went looking for Shoot fics, I was so excited to see one of my all-time favorite writers pop up. I knew this story would be fantastic and it did not disappoint. Truly lovely. Thank you!

Oh I love how you made it turn out ! Very nice :)

Dat plot twist. Amazing

That was amazing! So in character for Shaw! And yet so vulnerable too. So simple about such a complex character. These two together still amazes me! What a beautiful transition it was to watch too.

Wonderful job. Simple, clean and to the point! THIS is a work of ART!

I like this! I like it a lot. The way you describe Shaw's thought process and how Root is able to speak it is just so...agajskwj ya know? I really like this. Simple and complex at the same time

This was amazing

honestly the best shoot fic i have ever read. I could really hear shaw and root's voices in my head. perfect characterization. the only problem is that now any other fic i read won't be as good so I will never be satisfied :(