Emotions are all over the place. It doesn't make much sense.

Good story but I feel like this story would be so much better if it was a Nami or Namiza pairing.

Ouch poor Natsu. Erza was the last nail in the coffin.

How dare the stripper scare Wendy! I'm definitely gonna kick his ass because of that!

I don't care about Mira. Nothing about her smells good, she's not beautiful, I shouldn't have kissed her. I should save that for Erza.

Yeah, but it's all good Mavis helped out so I only have to wait 7 years. That and I don't care about Mira, she's Laxus's chick.

I would've appreciated a slice of chocolate cake but it's ok, Erza's kiss tasted better anyway. I want more!

I hope I didn't kill that human brat. That and I don't want Lucy touching me any more. No NaLu, Wentsu.

Omgrgggrrururu pllzpzlzpzlzpzpzp uppppdpdaaatateeeee

Please update. I'll love you forever. .

Please update as soon as you can when you have the time

Yo this story is lit as hell right now can't wait for the next chapter XD

I love this story! You have to update more often! This is a very interesting piece and I would like to read some more. I'm not to fond of the Jerza but I understand it's for the sake of the plot. Hopefully Natsu and Erza finally get together. As a fellow writer of Natza I give this story a 5 out of 5. Don't give up bro you got something good going on! -Spark Out

ya it is a little different... Natsu seems more forgiving than he should be because before it seemed like he hated Erza and the rest of fairy tail. But when he visited Erza, he acted like the kiss she and jellal had never happened.

I looked at the mail... Then rechecked it..
A small smile etched across my face...
One of my favourite stories just got an update